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Lil Bitz | 0 | 0% | |
Carnage | 5 | 100.00% | |
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10-26-04, 10:32 AM | #1 |
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Lil Bitz vs Carnage
IP: EE35 6341
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6 - 12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate No D/R Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-29-04 at 09:52 PM Must drop verse in 5000 minutes after check in. |
10-26-04, 04:18 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 7B2D 5EB6
Lil Bitz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-26-04 04:18 PM.
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10-26-04, 04:19 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 1703 487A
Carnage has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-26-04 04:19 PM.
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10-27-04, 03:20 PM | #4 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 596C 2677
Ima dog, about devour your ass like lil bitz and kibbles/
Ho, u go wit rap like big tits go wit little nipples// If dis is "fight night" y the hell i gotta "fight dike"/ Im about to dunk dis little bitches flow "like Mike"// U battlin is like a blind man tryin to see me/ U from Washington? Well your punches land as good as terrorist planes in D.C.// U 'Furious' and 'serious', cuz i said dat u got lil tits and a 'period'/ Call me da shredder cuz your rhymes come in whole and leave in "pieces"/ Ill have dis bitch lost in a car trunk, so fuck a "Reeses"// Listen, U gotta 99% of gettin killed like germs in "listerene"/ Im "sickining", u just got fried and popeyed like a "chickenwing"// uppin |
10-29-04, 03:13 PM | #5 | |
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IP: 596C 2677
okay here it goes. yeah yeah yeah
carnage i dont like u, im just tryin to be real just gonna spit a lil verse just to show u how i feel im hardcore dog, ill take ur head and bust it through the wall i bet when u go and use the bathroom, u piss on ur ball dont think cause ima a girl that im some shit cause if u still thinkin that then im introduce u to lil bitz u lil shit if my rhymes were dirt u be diggin it like a shevel u lost this battle so take some time off to get on my level |
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10-29-04, 03:37 PM | #6 | |
The Watcher
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IP: 28D6 AD76
Voted For: Carnage
aight, Lil Bitz...u had a nice attempt, i can tell you're a beginner...but u need to elevate...there was nothin in your verse that stood out as bein real good...the punches were all weak n played, u gotta be more creative wit those...n half the time it was like u were jus doin random freestylin cuz u werent really dissin him.........Carnage, not a bad verse...again, i didnt really see anythin special, but u at least made okay attempts at punches...anyways, V/ Carnage, for better overall verse n for hittin his opponent every time...no hate, jus honest feedback... |
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10-29-04, 04:12 PM | #7 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3BDD 17CF
Aiight son thnx lets get somemore votez!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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10-29-04, 04:47 PM | #8 |
'Member Those Golden Days
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IP: 71E7 6664
Voted For: Carnage
good battle punches- carnage easily u had harder hittin and more of em personals- neither multis- carnage, u had em metas- carnage u had more and better ones humor- carnage, i didnt laugh but i smiled flow- carnage, everythin worked better structure- carnage, not the best ive seen, but not the worst Carnage good drop overall. lose the // thing though. some of your wordin wuz sketchy, but overall a 6.5/10 Bitz u self glorified more than anythin. need to work on punches, structure, and flow. overall a 2/10 No hate just an honest voter. pz |
10-29-04, 04:55 PM | #9 | |
Puttin MD On The Map
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IP: 408D D2A2
Voted For: Carnage
carnage got this battle carnage-okay good punches were good for a newb.but as expected from them rhyme was basic and so was wordplay but better than lil bitz's....personals were good and flow was okay work on that some...structure was off work on that too same with wordplay but good drop for a newb 7/10 lil-okay you had a very very very basic drop rhyme scheme was very simple...punches were real weak...you misspelled shovel purposely to rhyme it with level...no personals.....flow was off...structure was horrible..and try not to self glorify it takes from it sometimes unless you incorperate it right....but elevate baaadddly...work on structure/punches/vocab/wordplay/and personals you both need to elevate v/carnage return the vote..battle in my sig...honest explained votes only.... graci Peace~1
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10-31-04, 10:55 AM | #10 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 093B DAE3
Aiight son favorz will be returned. Thnx For tha votes and feed bak.
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11-01-04, 02:33 PM | #11 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 596C 2677
Mor votes votes votes votes votes votes votes votes votes
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11-01-04, 02:38 PM | #12 | |
just a rapper
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This was feedback posted for Carnage
IP: 596C 2677
nice battle. in my opinion Carnage took this one. use more vocabulary lil bitz and keep elevating.
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11-02-04, 08:53 AM | #13 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 0D61 48C7
...........u r gay.....
Upping for votes.......... |
11-02-04, 09:03 AM | #14 | ||
+...Femin-iLL...+
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IP: 8F1B 440C
Voted For: Carnage
vote-carnage reason being: *lil more effective punches...they was wack as hell...but considering tha level of skill....they hit harder than lil bitz *more multis *better/more metaphors *attempted wordplay *flowed better i did lyke these lines from lil bitz: Quote:
-tha opener and closer on lil bitz was killin carnages...but he took more catagories.... my advice:....battle vets....elevate..
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11-02-04, 08:38 PM | #15 |
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IP: 9A6D 2480
Voted For: Carnage
lol nice flow carnage this vote goes to you nice creativity openin verse funny & tight structure good just get rid of da / it makes it seem basic punchlines good came hard at da opponent overall it was a good verse keep doing ya thing dawg & u to lil bitz
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