yall need to stay away from me stop saying my name in a negative way
yall niggas treat me like i havent dont this now feel tha sikness i embrace
yall talk shit but when i come to ya face ya shut up like yal drunk an sour drink folden ya lungs leavin wit no air i get stronger just feeling ya heart ...........sink
battle me ya life aint worth saving like an late expired ...........................coupon
begging me to give u mercy bitch plz once i clapp ya there aint no life refunds
yall niggas cant put out my fire,cuz i was destin to hold tha fucking tourch
couldn't be bless if u was tha christ of birth,leavin yall wit no luv no remourse
yall annoying like flying bugs i'll just kill u by using tha raid ........................spray
u think u can take ova what i've started wouldn't if u was alexanda tha great
my punches is like an quick death fate to u,call myself da punch quick sand
even if u gotten tha famous bread ya rhymes still woulnt be tha # 1......brand


yall talk shit but when i come to ya face ya shut up like yal drunk an sour drink - when u drink too much sour its like u cant talk


u think u can take ova what i've started wouldn't if u was alexanda tha great - he almost did took ova da world ( i think)





my punches is like an quick death fate to u,call myself da punch quick sand - aiight that means like when i punch u u so quick to get knock da fuck out

aiight dats my verse & my explaination

feedback plz

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hmph it wasnt bad but it was still good. had a little quality. return da favor in my sig.

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aiiiiiiight stop sleeping uppimn for more feedbacks holla

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decent drop...you couldve came a bit more harder on your punches,multi's n wordplay...but dont worry...just work on that


7/10

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stay up

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aiiiiiiiiiight i'll return tha fav keep dem feedbacks coming and dem links holla~!

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not bad your gettin better...7.6/10...your stuctures gettin better actually it is better perfect now just shorten your lines a bit more it will flow better...bad topic but good lines..

Aiiiiiiiiiight Thanks For Da Feedback Uppin For More Feedbacks Leave Links I'll Return Fav'z

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