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11-15-04, 09:16 PM
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Saaran-Lil TImmy Peep
IP: 5F90 9B8B
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1735214 left feed
yeah ok www.soundclick.com/saaran tracks called lil timmy story behind this shit is there is this kid named time that hit on my g.f. all the time so figured would be good content for a song recorded the first verse... then me and dat hoe broke up so then i recorded the end today... so hope ya'll like it
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11-15-04, 09:51 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 28AD 5545
ok, listening, really feeling this beat, nice voice too, and good delivery in this, like the story too, your lyrics were great too...sounded clean, good job fam...1
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11-15-04, 10:56 PM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: D666 F54C
word, this probly the hottest I've heard you drop, I really enjoyed this begining to end, keep droppin kikko... lol A.I took over the audio forum quick... good job famoz.
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11-15-04, 11:28 PM
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IP: 976C ABB3
word....this shit was dope...and funny too....lol
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11-16-04, 11:45 AM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: D666 F54C
uppin- for fam.
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11-16-04, 12:53 PM
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10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: 1A19 1DB0
hella dope line.... sumin like "fuck this bitch ass virgian, im gettin pussy when he's left flirtin" just stupid dope... all and all good lyrics threw-out
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11-16-04, 06:53 PM
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IP: EECF 4742
i know this beat............. WUtang..... i used this shit before i think..... its tight...... and ur flow is off the chain on this one.... it was comin word after word.... and ur flow kinda changes in the second verse, it was better in the first one..... but its still decent.... that last line was tight..... that virgin, while u gettin pussy...... and i think u sed "saaran rap is pullin a mr mathers" or sumthin.......... lmfao, that was funny..... no chorus, but its cool.......overally pretty decent track.... not as good as some of ur battles, but this was good
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11-18-04, 10:49 AM
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IP: 82D1 1D46
uppin for feed ont his joint
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11-18-04, 11:52 AM
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You Love My Style.
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IP: 5572 2B68
DAMN Saraan u elevated alot fam....shit... am proud of ya.
this was pretty amazin
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11-19-04, 01:30 AM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 6CFE 1779
This was pretty good...............lyrically. You can use some work on your production skills, like most of your dubs were off......horribly. Flow was nice for the most of it. What are you doing to your voice? It sounds like you are trying to sound a little more high pitched than you normally would......anyway, this would be a good track if you just brushed it up a bit......keep dropping
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