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11-22-04, 12:30 PM
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New to RV
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Tactics-Comin Out the Shadow
IP: A51B A3F0
Replied to Tony Rove and RKS
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/tacticsnfxmusic.htm It's the first song on the page, I started writing it at midnight, finished at 2, not even 12 hours old, peep it, Devize on the beat. -Tactics |
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11-24-04, 03:20 PM
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New to RV
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IP: A51B A3F0
Uppin this, only 6 views so I know barely anyone's looked at it. Peace.
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11-24-04, 03:36 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 49C0 0F03
*listening*
Intro says you're trying to express some emotions and yet it was really blah. Anyway, flow was nice, but the lyrics were kinda blah. Nothing really impressed me. I mean, it was alright, don't get me wrong, but you're saying the same shit as just about everyone. I'm feeling the emotion.....the flow actually fell off in a few spots because of your syllable counts. Anyway, keep dropping....you obviously got potential
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11-25-04, 01:01 AM
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The Light
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IP: 2479 D162
lyrically.. you got some dope metaphores.. but your flow is shaky.. try an open flow.. let it flow.. you always cutt your words off at the end of ya bar.. let it flow intot the next or just say the word completly.. when u spit, you shoudlnt have to cutt off your word to get it to flow.. jsut work on ya flow.. the rest will come when you find ya style.. -1
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Mixtape Pushed Back to mid september.. Holla at me for a copy still I'm felt cause im real. Can you say the same ? Prolly not.
Proud OYD member again
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