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11-24-04, 12:50 AM | #1 | ||||||
New to RV
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Borrrreeeeddd Freestyle
IP: 2B26 31C3
My Rhymes Are Intellegent Shinins Irrelevant
Definin The Best Of Em Line Up The Rest Of Em Find Me Smashin Em I Be Attackin Em Leavin Em Like Iraq An Dem, Droppin Lyrical Bombs Aint Fearin No Harm Its Clear Im The Bomb Im To Sick Spittin Shit Ruthless Splittin You In 2 When I Get At You N Laugh When The 22 Aim And Spray At You Layin You In The Dirt Foo Mommas Eyes Full Of Hurt Shoulda Know I Was Gon Merk You Now U Merked Lookin Up At The Roof Of The Church Wit Ya Eyes Closed Soul Risen The Doughs My Vision The Flowin Is Intuition Listenin To The Killa Villain Neva Submittin Just Comin In Slittin If An Attitiude Is What You Comin In Wit |
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11-24-04, 02:42 AM | #2 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
ok drop, you have some good rhyme's in it.
Foo Mommas Eyes Full Of Hurt Shoulda Know I Was Gon Merk You this line is stretched, and you sorta lost focus toward's the end. 4/10 keep dropping,keep elevating |
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11-24-04, 03:25 PM | #3 | ||||||
New to RB
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IP: 3240 794D
give it up my dude an try one of your other hobbies dont take it to heart.
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