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world surrounding... the deepest ive wrote
IP:
mirroring my optics i see the life i lead
pain is overcast as i contemplate inner greed my heart bleeds at the pain i've caused others selfish rampant emotions smothered, i need accost insecure feeling lied to, double crossed my minds on a journey lost, runaway, a stray from my head feeling so angry at the shit i've been fed surrounding propaganda media and the constant lying from which someones existance is striving or indeed dying the hatred has formed a message which i've chosen to propose; why has god give us life petals on the rose for in the end we all have to fall black white big or small there's no competition in death everyone has to repay their debt for god has let us have our chances chance is theres no heaven nor hell to go to a myth once again delivered and believed by illogical people the world is falling down tumbling atmosperically and socially god gave us life so lets all let it lead.. honestly one of the deepest poems i have ever wrote.. i would love to hear some feedback on this thanks alot |
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