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Old 07-07-02, 04:37 PM   #1
danja
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world surrounding... the deepest ive wrote

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mirroring my optics i see the life i lead
pain is overcast as i contemplate inner greed
my heart bleeds at the pain i've caused others
selfish rampant emotions smothered, i need accost
insecure feeling lied to, double crossed
my minds on a journey lost, runaway, a stray from my head
feeling so angry at the shit i've been fed
surrounding propaganda media and the constant lying
from which someones existance is striving or indeed dying
the hatred has formed a message which i've chosen to propose;
why has god give us life petals on the rose
for in the end we all have to fall
black white big or small there's no competition in death
everyone has to repay their debt for god has let us have our chances
chance is theres no heaven nor hell to go to
a myth once again delivered and believed by illogical people
the world is falling down tumbling atmosperically and socially
god gave us life so lets all let it lead.. honestly


one of the deepest poems i have ever wrote.. i would love to hear some feedback on this thanks alot
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