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our love
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Our Love
They say that we are too young and love is out of our range But I say we’ve been together long enough to see the seasons change Your so beautiful, when I first placed my eyes upon you I could not believe it How could some one with a beauty as great as yours not be a little conceited? Remember our love shall only last forever if you and I pray to the holy gates As that day grows closer, Shea Lauren Mosher, I promise I will help you escape During your struggle I will help make the next few years worth the wait Because as long as were in love together we hold each others destined fate Shea I promise that soon enough they will realize we are soul mates Everyday I shed tears, weeping on my bed because our love has become so great Even at this exact moment I take the time out to search for the tissues Wishing that our love is actually real and our emotions aren’t being misused It has been three months and my love for you continues to grow As we construct this magnificent love our eternal flame continues to glow ..........i love you kuttles.....
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WOW LOTS OF EMOTIONS HERE.......GOOD FLOW...........WORK ON VOCAB THOUGH BUT DIS SHIT IS GOOD......LOTS OF EMOTIONS.....U REALLY EXPRESSED YOUR FEELINGS HERE FAM 8/10 WORK ON VOCAB USE META'Z AND USE CREATIVITY FAM PEACE
O AND WELCOME BAK DROP AN FEEDBACK ON MY SHIT "the sleep & the dream" PLEASE LEAVE AN FEEDBACK PEACE
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i did not add alot of vocab and metas because my girl does not really like that ....(i think becuase she doesnt understand some of the metas and some of the vocab
thanks tho
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Chea Aiiiight..........leave An Feedback Plz In My Poem
"the Sleep & The Dream" Sorry For Freeposting Just An Reminder
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yeah i did that already......pce
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uuupppinnn for feed back....
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uppin for some feed back...cmon i wrote this for my girl.......
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