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Old 12-06-04, 09:41 PM   #1
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Calamity - Million Eyes (Sample)

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This is one of the songs that im doin for my own lil demo type thing..

Ima re-record this.. better quality and better flow.. this is just a 2 verse mixdown...


I left feedback over this last couple of weeks like crazy.. check a random joint, i'll be in there... to many links to find....

Leave feedback.. just listen.. do what you do.. -1

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Old 12-06-04, 09:59 PM   #2
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ooo snap lol this beat is Live as hell im feelin that beat
You Ride the beat Very nicely
you gotta young voice..
Nice Lyrics
Can't say much bad about this shit yo ...Solid Track
lol u Nice no doubt ..keep it up..
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Old 12-06-04, 10:29 PM   #3
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Have I heard this before......lol. Anyway, shit is turning out nice

I just thought I'd tell you again
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Old 12-07-04, 09:10 AM   #4
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damn man, I love yo flow on this shit. Gonna be tight shit. Holl on AIM when shit done. weerd.. dope shit, man. pc nice beat too. pc...
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Old 12-07-04, 11:43 AM   #5
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yes yes you know i think this shit is hot. keep it up. this shit is FIRE! you improved alot and your really doing your thang..beats kooo im feelin it
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Old 12-07-04, 01:54 PM   #6
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Am fly wit tha words

Elevate wit the birds....


Hahaha quotable...i have to say......................................


Nice shit fo rough draft hoe..lol lets get our finished..
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Old 12-07-04, 02:20 PM   #7
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I personally hate when catz post unfinished tracks but its all good, vocals sound a lil low....but the flow was tight....you are more snare focused now...FINALLY!!!LOL nah but it was tight....I liked the mellow emotion u had in the track it fit it well, an u even switched up ya rhyme scheme on this, an da vocab was complex...u really got alot better in my absence...good job son
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Old 12-09-04, 05:10 PM   #8
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thanks for the love ^^.. leave alink.. uppin -1
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Old 12-11-04, 01:21 PM   #9
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Old 12-11-04, 04:42 PM   #10
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Real nice flow, nice beat too, lyrics was aight but i'd enjoy hearing you using a little more vocab, thats the only real advice i can give wich would make you even better.
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Old 12-11-04, 11:16 PM   #11
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damn this is nice calamity man..... to be honest, wen i first got on this site, i thoughht u were wack as hell.. and that enygma was worse... but both of u are doin ur thing... i thought u and black dragon woulda been a good battle a few months ago.. but this track changed my mind completely.. along with other recent shit by u too... close to bein ontop of shit now
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Old 12-12-04, 07:23 AM   #12
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nice ish mayne i like the beat lots the chorus sounds coo. flow and delivery were on point. like ya said all ya need to redo is the quality and this track will be fire. daps keep at it mayne.
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Old 12-12-04, 11:00 AM   #13
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yea i like the beat..but dats not really important...but ya flow is always good...ya quality is good too...what kinda mic u got??

still this is a good track...got a real underground type vibe
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