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IP: 928C 00B1
Back Down
tight ass shit....
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Rastafari Walk Tall
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u aight snd 2 loud or 2 close 2 mic cos ur words is muffled
ur homie T.0 rips it up on every trak on ur page he got skills overall dis trak - 7/10
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it's the way Sameran fucked with the voice volume....but i guess thanx...uppin....people return favors!
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Herb
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aiight nice lil intro....like the whispering thing very nice...1st emcee aiight delivery is ok could use more emotion...you sound like u rushed this and didnt take ya time try using punch ins to perfect different parts and get them right...lyrics r kinda simple could use more complex and deep lines....chorus was ok.......2nd emcee slightly better then the first the echo thing is mad annoying man and ruins it production is kinda weak lyrics could use more punch lines more multis over dubs not back but the echo add libs think r off man way off......liek the effects on the chorus though......3rd emcee theres no emotion in his flow and delivery lyrics r mad simple try more multis more punch lines and practice ya mixing for ya production coz production was lacking.....
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IP: 928C 00B1
o come on now you sayin T.O.'s verse is slightly better? shit.....h's fuckin awesome....he'd shatter ya in a blaze battle...
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
Beats aight hook wasn't feelin too much but was aight...ya seem to be a lil close to the mic thats how it sounded but you said they fucked wit it so fair nuff...work on that 2nd guy was dope...but overall good track your good and you should get better as ya get older keep it up...
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20/20 VisioN
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2nd guy was the best, he was OK
eveyone else was just random... they not on his level lol overall 5/10 chorus wasnt bad, but voice was wierd
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