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Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-20-05 08:45 PM.

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Indeph has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-21-05 02:10 PM.

I'ma flip for the win..I'ma ahead,and yet you order quators(his 50 sig)
cause if you from our hearts..then I wanna organ donor
TC keep you waiting..And you getting old for the entry
how is this artist a legend,but get no's from Da vinci
you would think after all this,you'd bare the messege..
you'll jus get boot from crews,like where your leg End..(legend)
check the nigga Bio..look at the hoe he praise..
Katrina?..every nigga who had sex,knows that name..
yeah marraige needs agreements..so think do she like you..
I asked if she would marry legend,and she was like who?

Good Luck Fam..

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Voted For: Legend

Legend

Perfectly crafted my lyrics are composed with no flaws
Words create disaster, while you spit weak like cats with broke jaws
hahaha..Aight 9/10
Crews by the whole fall, against one like me, all ya hopes lost
Only way you'd drop something hard is if your penis broke off
I Like It...LOL Its Decent 8/10
I murder by the masses, creating nothing less than a classic
Cause you couldn’t control a flow if you directed traffic
First Line Decent.. Second Decent 7/10
Like cats who sip scolding tea too quick, I bring forth hot spits
And your verses steel wouldnt be hot if you were a fuckin locksmith
Not To Decent...Nice Creativity and I see where you was trying to go with it 5/10
Now we all know who sucks and who is the very best
Cause you couldnt kick two nice rounds if you played soccer with breast
Funny..I understand but kindof din't make Since..7/10

Your Lines was Dope..You probably have had the best lines I ever seen on here.. Good Drop but you didnt have no Personals which makes it drop and No multies...But Structure was decent and Nice Overall Drop 9/10

Indeph

I'ma flip for the win..I'ma ahead,and yet you order quators(his 50 sig)
cause if you from our hearts..then I wanna organ donor
Ok I suppose..Didnt Really hit Though 6/10
TC keep you waiting..And you getting old for the entry
how is this artist a legend,but get no's from Da vinci
[/b]kindof alright..I like it 7/10p[/b]
you would think after all this,you'd bare the messege..
you'll jus get boot from crews,like where your leg End..(legend)
Pretty good...For being Creative 7/10
check the nigga Bio..look at the hoe he praise..
Katrina?..every nigga who had sex,knows that name..
Hmm DOn't Know about this one..
yeah marraige needs agreements..so think do she like you..
I asked if she would marry legend,and she was like who?
Pretty Good..I suppose 6/10

You had nice good Personals like whoa and you still had a decent drop. Good flow and Structure and Made things clear and I know where you was comming from with the Creativity. But Legends Verse Did come Harder though. That doesnt mean hes better then you. Your still DOpe Fam
7/10

v/ Legend

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Voted For: Indeph

Indephs Verse

I'ma flip for the win..I'ma ahead,and yet you order quators(his 50 sig)
cause if you from our hearts..then I wanna organ donor
wasnt really feelin this one
TC keep you waiting..And you getting old for the entry
how is this artist a legend,but get no's from Da vinci
lol...good one
you would think after all this,you'd bare the messege..
you'll jus get boot from crews,like where your leg End..(legend)
pretty good...
check the nigga Bio..look at the hoe he praise..
Katrina?..every nigga who had sex,knows that name..
lol nice...
yeah marraige needs agreements..so think do she like you..
I asked if she would marry legend,and she was like who?
lmfao...probably favorite bar

Legends Verse

Perfectly crafted my lyrics are composed with no flaws
Words create disaster, while you spit weak like cats with broke jaws
doesnt make sense...so that basically means cats spit hard when their jaws arent broke?huh?...
Crews by the whole fall, against one like me, all ya hopes lost
Only way you'd drop something hard is if your penis broke off
lol ok better
I murder by the masses, creating nothing less than a classic
Cause you couldn’t control a flow if you directed traffic
ehh...ok
Like cats who sip scolding tea too quick, I bring forth hot spits
And your verses steel wouldnt be hot if you were a fuckin locksmith
kinda weak but ok...
Now we all know who sucks and who is the very best
Cause you couldnt kick two nice rounds if you played soccer with breast
wasnt a very good closer imo...

to legend i liked the 2nd bar the most here overall it was an ..ok verse not good enough for the win in my opinion though no hate and indeph an overall good verse had some lines that were ok and some were great good luck to both no hate

peace

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Voted For: Indeph


Perfectly crafted my lyrics are composed with no flaws
Words create disaster, while you spit weak like cats with broke jaws
^^weak punch and self glorification = wack
Crews by the whole fall, against one like me, all ya hopes lost
Only way you'd drop something hard is if your penis broke off
^^okay punch...lil humor
I murder by the masses, creating nothing less than a classic
Cause you couldn’t control a flow if you directed traffic
^^again self glirification=wack decent punch
Like cats who sip scolding tea too quick, I bring forth hot spits
And your verses steel wouldnt be hot if you were a fuckin locksmith
^^wack punch and again self glorification=wack
Now we all know who sucks and who is the very best
Cause you couldnt kick two nice rounds if you played soccer with breast
^^again self glorification=wackkkk...weak punch

basically your verse was weak....really dont see why u battled a vet........your verse had more self glorification than it did punches........you need to add personals to have a better verse........work on that.......if your lines werent centered your structure would be off.....you flow was good........but your punches were lacking.....try to direct them more to your opponent


I'ma flip for the win..I'ma ahead,and yet you order quators(his 50 sig)
cause if you from our hearts..then I wanna organ donor
^^didnt rhyme at the end...but nice personal/punch
TC keep you waiting..And you getting old for the entry
how is this artist a legend,but get no's from Da vinci
^^nice personal again....
you would think after all this,you'd bare the messege..
you'll jus get boot from crews,like where your leg End..(legend)
^^seemed forced....decent punch
check the nigga Bio..look at the hoe he praise..
Katrina?..every nigga who had sex,knows that name..
^^nice personal/punch
yeah marraige needs agreements..so think do she like you..
I asked if she would marry legend,and she was like who?
^^nice punch.....

aight you came with a pretty solid drop..........definately had way better punches because you directed them towards him more.........you fit the punches with all the personals you used......had some creative personals..........structure was a lil off but could use some work.........and you didnt self glorify

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Voted For: Legend

have to give this one to this boy right here his lines where good he had good flow good strcuture and his rhyming was ok but this battle was a lil hard to vote on but it was iight. you came harder in punches and opener-closure was good and personels where ok so overall I give ya a 7.7/10 and hey hit up on my linkd peace.

this is what got my vote out of the whole battle


Crews by the whole fall, against one like me, all ya hopes lost
Only way you'd drop something hard is if your penis broke off
I murder by the masses, creating nothing less than a classic
Cause you couldn’t control a flow if you directed traffic
Like cats who sip scolding tea too quick, I bring forth hot spits
And your verses steel wouldnt be hot if you were a fuckin locksmith

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Voted For: Indeph

Obvioulsy Indeph Won Cus He Had More Personals And Better Punches.

Openor=Indeph,He Wasn't Self Glorafyin,Had A Decent Punch And Personal
Strukture=Legend,Lol Tha Different Color Thing Wass Ill
Personals=Indeph,More Personals And They Wass Decent
Punches=Umm Imma Say Indeph,Cus His Punches Hit A Lil Harder Than Legends
Vokab=None
Wordplay=Indeph Better Wordplay
Closer=None,Indeph Ya Closer Wass Weak And Legend Ya Shit Wass Tired As Hell..

Overall Indeph Got This Kid Had Harder Punches And Personals..Fix Ya Strukture And Up Ya Vokab....

/V Indeph...................

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Yo nice honest votes. No herbs. ok. Now Uppyn. Glad and surprised I got some votes.

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Uppyn. Too Hot To Be Slept On Shit. Fuckyn Sluts..

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good battle right here.

you both came strong, but i say deph took this.

Yo why don't ya'll vote in my other battles. Dayum. They getting slept on all mad.

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