RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > The block > Lyricist Lounge > Crews n' Collaborations
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 12-20-04, 02:39 PM   #1
Dabatos
C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
 
Dabatos's Avatar
 
Posts: 5,693
Joined: Aug 2004
From: Bay Area
Status: Offline
The Comittee Try Outs

IP: A34C 61B2

Roster

Leader: Virtue
Co-Leader: Dabatos (I. Mind)


Members:
?
?
?
?
?
?
?

Dope Head's Only
__________________

www.FG-Servers.com





Send a message via AIM to Dabatos   Reply With Quote
Old 12-20-04, 02:46 PM   #2
Insight.
'Member Those Golden Days
 
Posts: 8,229
Joined: Oct 2004
Status: Offline
IP: 71E7 6664

u didnt peep my free agent thread, that saddens me. but heres a tryout, i wrote this last week against Drastic Measurez.

His measures sure are drastic so that no one knows his bitten past, when it came to dopeness defined he just couldnt last.
DM AKA the Street Poet bit and got banned, i dont care bout your name im the ruler of this land
Just like in foot loose ill knock this "ho down", step up to me u cant so ill just take this babys crown.
how ironic this man tries to be a prophet, but hes just too little been smokin a bit too much chronic.
Tries to be accepted in this virtual world, will e date just so he can say "Ya Thats my girl."
This is the real flatline bitch, we'll call the paramedics, u drop other people's hot rhymes and then take all the credit.
Always one step ahead, even in these seeds, zero'in to shoot ya in ya heart so u cant breathe.
Hes a coward at heart, his name change proves it, got out of PSA just to go back to it?
Put some flava into his verses by puttin him in a haze, i hope his hiding days is just a phase.

Explantions: Dopness Defined: His old crew, he got kicked out for not usin Personals
Street Poet: his alias, got banned for biting
King, land lines: hes got a crown in his sig
Baby Line: baby in his sig
E-date: he is e datin GangstaGurl (thus the wordplay "..Got a girl")
Flatline: says it when hes dropped a verse in his battles
Seeds: in the seeds im above him
Coward: changed his name to get out of PSA, and nows hes bak in it.
"Flava": old sn wuz flavahazepimp

I specialize in personals, hope this is good enough.
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-20-04, 02:48 PM   #3
Dabatos
C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
 
Dabatos's Avatar
 
Posts: 5,693
Joined: Aug 2004
From: Bay Area
Status: Offline
IP: A34C 61B2

sorry man, elevate alittle more, fix up ur structure also
__________________

www.FG-Servers.com





Send a message via AIM to Dabatos   Reply With Quote
Old 12-20-04, 02:56 PM   #4
Insight.
'Member Those Golden Days
 
Posts: 8,229
Joined: Oct 2004
Status: Offline
IP: 71E7 6664

well im droppin a verse against NNN tonight, so i guess ill re tryout? tomorrow
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-20-04, 09:31 PM   #5
..Decree..
The Rulers Back
 
..Decree..'s Avatar
 
Posts: 4,496
Joined: Jun 2004
From: Queens,NY
Status: Offline
IP: 5510 817C

lmao batos add SPul to our roster here an add crossword<rofl i landed him to me an go waaay back hes dope... an add ..Buddha.. to the roster on this thread an add For$aken rofl i told you we would be fine go check in an shit i got the threads all up
__________________
O.wning Y.ou D.aily

Y.ou Know My Style 20 Niggas Wit 40 Cals


Last edited by Virtue : 12-20-04 at 10:56 PM.
Send a message via AIM to ..Decree..   Reply With Quote
Old 12-29-04, 06:51 PM   #6
50hater_killer
Knock out kings fur life
 
50hater_killer's Avatar
 
Posts: 947
Joined: May 2004
From: ky
Status: Offline
IP: 07D4 5143

iight heres my drop

I use this mic as if it is my last resort,
for when I am done with you you're memory will be distort.
throwin punches like a baller,
and you will not know the difference between my lyrics and Ali.
My A game will be like no other game for I will be droppin bombs,
and treatin u like a POW for you are no other then a wannabe saddam.
My lyrics will cut you like bread and butter,
for my rhymes are like a drug and do not take to much or you're mind might turn to blubber.
Fuck this shit I am threw with this I throw down this mic,
and give you a face full of this dick.

well thats all I could do for now
  Reply With Quote
Old 01-06-05, 08:32 PM   #7
convicted
Flyweight
 
convicted's Avatar
 
Posts: 127
Joined: Jan 2005
From: gutter
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 995C FBA1

Tha Only Thing That Gives Me Tha Right To Stay What I Like Is Being In A Mic
A Chance To Speak Tha Mind / Gotta Think Fast Befor I Go Blind/
Repeated Rap Self Concieted Crap/ 2 Year Old Kiddies On A 40 Year Old Mans Lap/
Yo Hit Me Back Cb83
__________________
PAYBAKS A BITCH http://tinypic.com/20gzvm
  Reply With Quote
Old 01-06-05, 08:37 PM   #8
For$akeN
Umm...Yeah
 
For$akeN's Avatar
 
Posts: 5,924
Joined: Apr 2004
Status: Offline
Text Record: 8-0
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 0267 71DD

Chief- your already in CS
50 hater- elevate and comeback also, don't put too many unneeded words in each line
convicted- elevate again change the structure up like this:

Tha Only Thing That Gives Me Tha Right To Stay What I Like Is Being In A Mic
A Chance To Speak Tha Mind /
Gotta Think Fast Befor I Go Blind/
Repeated Rap Self Concieted Crap/
2 Year Old Kiddies On A 40 Year Old Mans Lap/

and ^try to make them more even.........
__________________
  Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 03:53 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.