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Check in by: 01-26-05 at 11:50 AM

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THE_ONE has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-21-05 11:52 AM.

You gettin knocked out the ballpark, i call you Sammy So-Sad/
Writin rhymes for hallmark, your best shit is saved on note PAD/
where's your gonads?......i think you forgot them in your boy/
if this kid pooped out acid, thats the only way your shit would destroy/
i start the war.....break down metal doors with metaphors/
getting nervous to drop shit, like public bathrooms with no doors/
i spark this....mic and leave you a heartless carcus/
this kid's tryin to steal my rhymes like Luda from underground artists/
Erode ur flows, like water u can't hold ur own form/
Let his dome torn fuck bitches every day like i make home porn/
Kid can't get his own label, so he creates his own fable/
"dis-in-vowel' U from the navel.... robbin his rhymes, like a baby from the cradle/
Go WWE on this bitch, like im battling sable/
Got this pussy, hiding undertneath the table/


quick keystyle nothing much butr enough to merk you

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3x has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-05 07:18 PM.

you say your the one but realy you is none/
so i sugest you turn your back and run /cause while im at the top youll fizzle at the bottom / and they call you butter fingers since your you slip of your dick/
and this mother fuckers tryin to rap even though hes a hick/and this dudes 17 and hes never won a battle/and to finish it of i think your mom wants you to check the cattle/

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need name change

real name: el concistador


how do i change my name this isnt 3x anymore he gave me this account cause he dosnt go here nomore

if you wanna know why i wrote what i did just read his profile

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need name change

real name: el concistador


how do i change my name this isnt 3x anymore he gave me this account cause he dosnt go here nomore

Voted For: THE_ONE

da_1 my vote goes 2 u it was ok but step it up a lil more

opena, punches, mutlis, vocab, overall, structure, & closa goes 2 da_1

3x ur shit was weak improve a lil more den try anotha battle lata on down da road

thankz uppin yall uppin this shit yall

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uppin this shit yall come on yall uppin no sleepin

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Voted For: THE_ONE

yeah the one did take this battle pretty easily 3x verse wasnt hot at all. he needs to work on makin his punches more creative n hit harder. n work on that structure it just makes it annoying to read when it runs on like that. the one verse was pretty good ight flow, but work on ur punches too those wont work against a stronger opponent.
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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

uppin people vote

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need name change

real name: el concistador


how do i change my name this isnt 3x anymore he gave me this account cause he dosnt go here nomore

uppin for votes yes yes yesssssssssss more votes for me

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uppin for votes yes yes yesssssssssss more votes for me

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uppin on this shit yalll WTF vote yall vote

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