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Old 01-22-05, 09:38 PM   #1
anu-hope
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Rose

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I admire you rose,

for no matter good or bad
you strike a pose
which is able to hold
my most feared foes
those which cannot see
that which is trully free
could never imagine that they're a bee
trying to get at your honey
it cost no money
to admire you rose
you trully are one of a kind
I would give you to a girl thats hard to find
on a day when the sun and the moon are aligned
in the master scheme of life i like your design
full bloom in your prime
heavenly scent as if divine,

You care not of my looks or my clothes,
for that i admire you rose.
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Old 01-23-05, 04:43 PM   #2
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pretty nice
vocab needs to improve
flow was aight
keep writing
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