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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
01-10-05, 07:54 PM
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New to RV
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Need Some Feedback Please
IP: 2FD3 68AD
Whaddup 17 year old MC havent been rhymin very long. check out my songs or w/e and drop some conmstructive feedback. if u hate please give a reason dont just say it sux. Aight peace out
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/stezmusic.htm |
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01-10-05, 08:14 PM
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Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: B130 A9C1
Lets see.....
1.Flow-Its ok, On point...mostly 2.Emotion- Its pretty good, slightly mono. 3.Delivery- I thought it was nice. 4.Lyrics- Pretty corny. Who cares if u a cracker. Its nuttin new. Make sure you leave feedback on other songs. Or Seven n Phenom will Lock-n-Delete This.-1 |
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01-10-05, 08:45 PM
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20/20 VisioN
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IP: 0FE6 BC1D
ur lyrics suck.. omg so basic, like 3rd grade level at best lol
flow was OK, quality was average, delivery was OK... overall 5/10 LYRICS NOT GOOD lol but ull learn and elevate...hopefully lol 1
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01-10-05, 08:57 PM
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#4
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New to RV
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IP: 2FD3 68AD
lol thanks for the feed... im guessin yall listenein to the first song only based on comments
Yea ill definetly check out other peoples shit im just new here peace |
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01-15-05, 11:07 AM
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IP: 74E2 4E7B
ya chorus for the first link-Whoo Bangin.. =
 i wasn't feeling that, you have a good voice for the beat.. emotion was ok... delivery was str8.. but work on ya lyrics they sound extra basic.. like "this is my sheet, i fold it up neat".. it's kinda too simple... and when i say simple i don't mean go run to get the dictionary that won't help, ya know.. just find a creative way to say things without going str8 to the point.. use metaphors some word-play, maybe a few multis..
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