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Flyweight
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needs tweaking badly
IP: 5043 32F4
Feel like i'm on trial because of my style
i ain't in denial i'm a product of 8 mile and i say dat with a big fuckin smile i need some tail it's been quite a while my rhymes are so-so but i have no flow and no hoe only numbers to dial on the big ole phone i'm like the vaccine to the motherfuckin rapscene abstinence is not for me thats too much like fasting i'm 2 obscene 4 you pussies to get past me i see your lips flapping what you trying to ask me i was only on my way cuz i know youd like to blast me I now realize you were penalized for having that nasty cow for a mother one way or another i'll be found not dead when is the last time you got head you fuckin pot head i'm so hot headed and i'm headed through a red light in your district i may be irrate for a flyweight least i got sheets & food to eat on my plate i'm a little impatient still i wait for my big day pimpin livin just a skylight away how dare you violate my blinddate the stakes have changed but it's now stalemate too late for your page to be turned just let it burn i'm gonna riot and ecsape back to the barn i'll meet you there if you have the guts to show up i know i'll beat you there so throw up your arms arent you aware of the situation at hand i'm having a fucking revelation again so pay more attention to my fly affectionate phrases taking you bitches through mazes chew how do you do it you amaze us please appraise us for a loan you say please realize that i can't condone this gay he's condemned to play with his nuts all day i just turn and walk away & kill you the minute you hit on me An ounce of pain what is this charades you rain on my parade & i'll break both you legs sorry i just aint got no respect for fags once im paid you cant raid my snoop deville I aint scared bitch & i always shoot to kill tell your mom she's beautiful I know you will i hit her up last night do you know who paid the bill just because this rhyme sux dont mean i have no skill I am only a drunk likes to freestyle and pop pills like ecstacy morphine prozac and advils and when i try my hardest i prove i have mad skills make your brains look like you have tiny cat skulls i appreciate the pranks you pull you little rascals time to go though there's a task at hand for the master give me a decent rating you bastards or ima make your cap spill i'm just kidding still i aint so nice i'd knock your lights out but you aint got no lights my rap is weak but you should check my bull fights i'm undefeated better believe that's right clear the deck night after night this is so shitty but thats ok;; ![]() If you are an actual rapper that has a pretty good disc made already than I would like your response and any suggestions or methods that proved to work for you. Or just to promote a track if you think i'd be interested in hearing it,thank you |
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Knock out kings fur life
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IP: 23A8 883C
I think you could do a little better on this one but here is what I found you need to use more imagry homes you had alright vocab alright closure but the opener had my lost but no hate.
6.6/10 |
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