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01-03-05, 01:17 PM
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Rastafari Walk Tall
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2.30 Faded Freestyle
IP: E81D BEA8
was /am still faded- heard a beat-freestyled-link 2 sclick in sig-drop sum feed
links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=168474 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=168012 
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01-07-05, 03:38 AM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: D666 F54C
sounds like your reading your freestyle... in parts. Some of it is pretty decent, a couple standout lines- quality needs help- check audio assistance thread "everything you need" and look down the list under cool edit... use some of those tutorials it can help ur quality... keep droppin..1
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01-07-05, 03:44 AM
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Ask About Me
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IP: B006 2328
why do you have those links in your thread......
listening.......nice vocab.......it does sound like you are reading quality is really bad........pretty weak btu just keep elevating.... sounds liek you reading again....... are you sure you are freestyling it sounds liek youu reading...... |
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01-15-05, 11:24 AM
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IP: 74E2 4E7B
it Does Actually sound like your reading and ya quality is not good.. you have your vocals to high for your beat.. you prolly got the red marks in Cool Edit when you mixed ya track down... yo need to take the background noise out too... the beat was nice, just work on production the quick things to check for before you mixdown a track should be in the audio assistance section.. but other than that, not a bad freestyle.. ya energy was good..
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01-15-05, 12:52 PM
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The Light
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IP: 4E3C C11B
yea, this sounds like your readin.. and if it sounds liek your reading, theres a .11111% your actually freestyling lol...... it aight.. for a freestyle, its aiiight.. cause when u freestyle your flow is supposed to shine.. cause bassically your just focused on flow, and the lyrics come second.. thats a natural reaction when freestyling.. unlike when u write, lyrics are focused on more, and flow is sacrificed...
second half sounds liek u sorta freestyled..and it was better.. but i mean, it w/e.. its strait for a freestyle...nice thoughts.. keep droppin
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01-17-05, 11:19 PM
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Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: 25E4 9760
Quality is meh....beat os nice....catchy type shit....this is good
for a freestyle....lyrics are coo....emotions is good, and your presence is good....flow is pretty ok....one lil slip...but yuo started back up nicely....good job man please peep http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172631 |
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01-17-05, 11:48 PM
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20/20 VisioN
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IP: F762 BA0E
beat is ok, u def didnt freestyle, cuz def sounds like u read no doubt, it was very long and fast wif alot of words. hard to belive especially cuz it sounded like u read it
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01-18-05, 03:55 AM
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STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
Work On Emotion And Flow And Youll Be Dope I See Alot Of Potential In You Sun For Real But I Told You This Already Pretty Good Overall Once You Fix That Yull Be Dope Fo Real
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