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02-12-05, 10:36 PM | #1 | ||||
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Rep Yo City Remix - Enygma, DV and Knightshade
IP: 2FD5 47F6
I was trying to get this done before anyone noticed that DV and Knightshade's version needed another verse, but here it is anyway......and pretty fucking dope too
Rep Yo City remix
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02-13-05, 04:07 PM | #2 | ||||
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I didn't think this was gonna get so slept on
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02-13-05, 05:23 PM | #3 | ||||||
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ok not feelin the hook... but thats cause i dont like any new york new york remix hook. felt knightshades verse... loved DV's verse, he got that hard grimey flow. lovin the second hook bein as im from philly. YEA. Enygma killin the last verse, Illadelphia representin. Track was hott. 8.5
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02-13-05, 06:33 PM | #4 | |||||
Engineer / Club Promoter
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IP: 74C8 66CC
typing as I listen. That "bag of erb" hounds like "baguhurb" - gotta work on annunciation there. Flow on the first verse is off in 1/2 the spots. Lyrics were on point.
Second voice - DEFINITELY a computer mic, lyrics were on point, deliv was on point, lyrics were on point. All in all a great verse if not for the quality which is a damn shame. Dude got sonned by his mic. Third verse, quality was about average. Flow was rushed in some spots and well paced in others. Lyrics were on, deliv was on - watch them doubles and adlibs, didn't line up some spots which made it hard as hell to hear and understand what was said. Pretty good verse. All in all a cool track, but I never liked this *BEAT*. Good concept to do it liek this though. Edited "verse" to "beat".
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02-14-05, 10:27 AM | #5 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 888E 1908
pretty good enygma killed the track props to all 3 of u get it finished
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02-14-05, 07:46 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: 3B27 2020
typin as i listen... i heard Knightshades thing before on his Sc before...... ok Hook...... i like ur voice alot better than most...... u had a nice constant flow but u need improve alil on pronouncin.... also there was a drastic fall from the hook to your verse
ahhh DV...... wat was goin on??? ur thing was messed up quality wise alil bit, like some words were REALLY loud and some was regular.... and it sounded like u started a new record every 5 words.... not feelin that..... i like ur flow, but ur verse was totally fucked quality wise..... Enygma's hook was ok.... "Phillay" sounded alil weird, lol, but nothin to worry about...... Love the flow on this track, and i can catch every word in it for the most part, u had the best flow, and some nice lines like the opener..... Enygma took this track. |
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02-14-05, 08:56 PM | #7 | |||||
Seattle Hat Wit A Lean
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IP: 2B9D 28F8
i liked this....
knightshade... not feeling your hook, i dunno jus didnt really work i dont think.... your flow was ok, i think it couldve been better.... everything else was fine, quality was decent... dv... loved your verse... great flow, lots of eneregy crammed into it....what i like to see... main thing off was quality, but thats fixable.... enygma wasnt feelin the hook.... but when you got into the core of your verse you made up for it... shit was mad nice, good work....tight flow all the way through...... overall i liked this joint..... jus a few minor things all ya'll couldve fixed up, but really nuttin thats gon kill this track... good work fellas...
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