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Royal_T has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-18-04 01:19 PM.

Tstorm has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-18-04 01:29 PM.

another newb to rv steps to battle...but hasnt elevated like the last
Like u had an accident..scraped through,but ya style didnt survive the car crash
with so many "cracks" in this guys structure..he mustve been snorting coke
you remind me of cling-film on the toilet...coz u really are a practical joke!
no chance of winning...battling me`s like taking a national lottery bet
you couldnt make ya vocabulary sick...if u threw up the alphabet!
i tell you for free, you cudnt hit 2 straight lines..if you keyed em on a car
and ya rhyme skills are less interesting...than your blank avatar!
so outta focus, put you in front of a mirror and you still wouldnt see
not to stir shit up,but you dnt get more "herbish" than a guy called royal-tea!

I cant believe you wanna battle me, Its gonna be a tragedy,
Softer than a song featuring Nick Cannon and Cassidy/

My lyrics like bullets so u betta keep on your teflon vest,
Or else Im see yo p*ssy ass laid in a box, in a funeral dress/

Sayin that sh*t u said, I see you feenin for a loss, and you finna get served, My lyrics like a tazor, have ya shakin like a dancer in you got served/

Yo sorry lyrics aint gonna have nobody impressed, But people gonna pay you respect after I blow a whole in yo chest/

Listen, this Aint the first time you gonna lose to me, You aint taking a bow cuz you did good, but you bowing cuz Im f*ckin ROYAL T

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Voted For: Tstorm

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TStorm:
another newb to rv steps to battle...but hasnt elevated like the last
Like u had an accident..scraped through,but ya style didnt survive the car crash
ehh Alright Opener (4/10)
with so many "cracks" in this guys structure..he mustve been snorting coke
you remind me of cling-film on the toilet...coz u really are a practical joke!
Eeh Alright (5/10)
no chance of winning...battling me`s like taking a national lottery bet
you couldnt make ya vocabulary sick...if u threw up the alphabet!
lol i laughed (6/10)
i tell you for free, you cudnt hit 2 straight lines..if you keyed em on a car
and ya rhyme skills are less interesting...than your blank avatar!
good personal.. bad punch to begin it(5/10)
so outta focus, put you in front of a mirror and you still wouldnt see
not to stir shit up,but you dnt get more "herbish" than a guy called royal-tea!
Lol (6/10)


Royal_T:
I cant believe you wanna battle me, Its gonna be a tragedy,
Softer than a song featuring Nick Cannon and Cassidy/
That Was Really Wack... (3/10)
My lyrics like bullets so u betta keep on your teflon vest,
Or else Im see yo p*ssy ass laid in a box, in a funeral dress/
um even worse (2/10)
Sayin that sh*t u said, I see you feenin for a loss, and you finna get served, My lyrics like a tazor, have ya shakin like a dancer in you got served/
yea (4/10)
Yo sorry lyrics aint gonna have nobody impressed, But people gonna pay you respect after I blow a whole in yo chest/
yea (4/10)
Listen, this Aint the first time you gonna lose to me, You aint taking a bow cuz you did good, but you bowing cuz Im f*ckin ROYAL T
best line (5/10)


Punches: Ts
Personals: Ts
Flow: Ts
Structure: Tie
Complexity: Ts
Multies: Ts

opener: Ts
Closer: Ts
Conistency: Ts


Ts.. i see you came easy in this battle no need to harp on you..

RT.. Make your punches harder hitting. look at some of the verses on the site and compare yours to thiers.. you will see a big difference take notes.. and practice..

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Voted For: Tstorm

v/Tstorm......he gets my vote cause his punchs hit hard an he was creative wit his diss's he had sum good vocab an structure perfect....royal T.....u had an ight opener but u weren't consistent wit the diss's u feel off from the begginin to the end u were to basic wit ur verse.....
punchs=T storm
multi's=(not many used)storm
vocab=storm
structure=storm
overall=T storm
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Voted For: Tstorm

ok you win

you had alot more meat[hore that actaully worked,,,nothing really that good struvtre qwas alil off but it was coo..
you need to add more personals and les punches..although punches are good personals win battles....elevate..

ROYAL..you had bad structure and you need to stop with all the self glorifactaion...other thna that you just need to go elevate...

vote=tstrom

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