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07-30-02, 01:23 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Suicide
IP: 55E0 EB47
it's too hot in here i need to breathe
too much stress i need to relieve the world keeps spinning as my life ends and i try to mesh with the crowds different blends my heart keeps bleeding but i JUST WON'T DIE and every night i pray to god a heartfelt cry thoughts of my homecoming flash though my mind as i blackout and suddenly become blind pills taking an affect on me and now a painful life of pain and sorrow is all i see will i be missed? naw, i doubt it i told them i was gonna do it. i screamed and shouted but they act as though i'm crazy when in fact they were just too lazy too lazy to take the time to understand where i'm coming from WHAT? u think i'm dumb no time to answer that as a matter of fact i'm leaving!i'm out! this world isn't so tough i just had enough it's time to get away cant stay here another day take a last breath and say hello to death Last edited by cherry : 07-30-02 at 01:27 AM. |
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07-30-02, 01:55 AM | #2 | ||||||
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NO SLEEPING!
IP: 55E0 EB47
i wanna hear what u think. don't sleep! did u hate it, like it, love it? what part was ur fav or what part didn't u like? what did u think? i wanna no DON' T SLEEP ON THIS PIECE
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08-02-02, 02:28 AM | #3 | |||||||
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Re: Suicide
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u had a nice beginning .. it pulled me right 2 the topic those middle linez had mad emotion in them, just like i can feel ur pain and the endin waz just askin for the verse from hell .. nice drop |
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08-02-02, 06:41 AM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: B5AC E74C
this was tight, nice emotion put out, nice rhymes and nice feeling with it, peace
signed, ~madd |
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08-02-02, 09:06 AM | #5 | ||||||
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I hate this topic but im sure everyone can
relate to a certain degree even me! Keep spittin da realness ... Props ~1~ |
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08-02-02, 09:00 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 4BB1 41BE
my gurl this is on point!
a lil different topic~~ dont worry be happy~<<< the quote for the day where is all this drama coming from?? from the situation between me and ya boi!!!! dont sweat out lil drama!! the cat is just "nesha-deprived" and he blames me for it!!! he cant have you anymore and cant fatham the thought!! you need to just go ahead and blow him off the edge by messin wit me!! even though i know your current situation!! |
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08-02-02, 10:45 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
yo cherry dis was ill.. do you battle? cuz ya rhyme scheme is nice and you'd be a worthy challenger ta defeat.... im me at Lyricalvision
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