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Old 06-05-03, 08:09 PM   #1
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An old piece written 11-17-02 at 2:05 am...obviously I was in a depressing mood when I pen'd this |_

Depressing Mood

My mind is lost in a trapped world of emotions
Anger, violence, depression, and sadness fills this ocean
An ocean within myself where there's no help
Everything known to me can never be felt
I travel alone in the darkness that consumes me
At times I feel there's nothin' here for me
No one who wants or needs me to be who I be
The sadness consumes me and takes over
Giving me the feeling of my happiness being over
In this world, it seems as though no one understands me
But I wish someone could care and have me
A lost soul is what I call myself
Wishing someone would lend me their help
But no one seems to wanna reach out
I wonder if anyone would care if I bleed out da mouth
Sometimes I find myself in a state of depression
I guess this is why I hold a question
Not knowing what the question is
Nor knowing an answer for it
When I become this way I don't know what to do
I can't figure out how to change from being blue
I guess I'm sad cuz I feel unloved
But someday someone will become the one

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Old 06-05-03, 10:20 PM   #2
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ill shit..felt this one....but people gotta stop make depressing shit in here its getting old....and if u do make it depressing..make sure its true..
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Old 06-06-03, 05:16 PM   #3
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Thankz 4 da reply........but this was my only depressing piece.....


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Old 06-09-03, 03:20 AM   #4
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Uppin'
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Old 06-09-03, 03:30 AM   #5
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aww u shouldnt feel unloved and no one should ever feel like that nah mean...but we all go through those moments sometime in life.. cuz i know i have felt wat u wrote about and it sucks to feel that way but once u go through that u gain alot of confidence afterwards nah mean...but ayo nice drop and much luv..pz
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Old 06-09-03, 03:36 AM   #6
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Thank u 4 ur uplifting message........but I'm glad to say I'm past that point in my life......just posted it to see what people would have to say......thank you sweetheart...

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Old 06-10-03, 02:47 PM   #7
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Feedback..............
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Old 06-10-03, 02:49 PM   #8
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Very deep good content

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Old 06-10-03, 03:25 PM   #9
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Thankz 4 da reply................



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