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An old piece written 11-17-02 at 2:05 am...obviously I was in a depressing mood when I pen'd this |_
Depressing Mood My mind is lost in a trapped world of emotions Anger, violence, depression, and sadness fills this ocean An ocean within myself where there's no help Everything known to me can never be felt I travel alone in the darkness that consumes me At times I feel there's nothin' here for me No one who wants or needs me to be who I be The sadness consumes me and takes over Giving me the feeling of my happiness being over In this world, it seems as though no one understands me But I wish someone could care and have me A lost soul is what I call myself Wishing someone would lend me their help But no one seems to wanna reach out I wonder if anyone would care if I bleed out da mouth Sometimes I find myself in a state of depression I guess this is why I hold a question Not knowing what the question is Nor knowing an answer for it When I become this way I don't know what to do I can't figure out how to change from being blue I guess I'm sad cuz I feel unloved But someday someone will become the one Last edited by Demon : 06-05-03 at 08:13 PM. |
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ill shit..felt this one....but people gotta stop make depressing shit in here its getting old....and if u do make it depressing..make sure its true..
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Thankz 4 da reply........but this was my only depressing piece.....
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Uppin'
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aww u shouldnt feel unloved and no one should ever feel like that nah mean...but we all go through those moments sometime in life.. cuz i know i have felt wat u wrote about and it sucks to feel that way but once u go through that u gain alot of confidence afterwards nah mean...but ayo nice drop and much luv..pz
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Thank u 4 ur uplifting message........but I'm glad to say I'm past that point in my life......just posted it to see what people would have to say......thank you sweetheart...
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Feedback..............
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Very deep good content
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Thankz 4 da reply................
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