Laying in the dirt, depression runs through me like a viral disease//
Beef left unslaughtered, I wonder when this cycle will cease//
Nothing's left in my life, writing verses is completely vital to me//
There is no best in this, everywhere I go there is titles I see//
In the end, the bottom is exactly where my rivals will be//
Like Kings knocked off their throne and living right on the street//
I keep myself high, forever the crown rests on my head//
I make my own decisions, so for now, it's suggestions I dread//
Let me stress to your head, I'm my own man and I have no friends//
Too many motherfuckers around me and I tend to get tense//
My mother said it herself, a person like me don't deserve to be loved//
From my father, everything between us was certainly mugged//
So, I'm left in this position, only got the art of Hip Hop workin' me up//

yo man, this was sum crazy dope shit right here. 10/10, ya ryme scheme was really fuckin dope.

i dont got a open mic 2 tell u 2 leave feedback on, so, could u vote on my battle maybe?

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thanx man

now u can say it's a 1o my flow was off on one part. i fixed it up but thanx ND I WILL RATE URES

yo that was good but no 10 ha...that makes me laugh but u actually did good i myself would give it a 7.5/10 it was all good except for the thing u said dont forget to check my new ones out i released i after another in a row....."Turn The Pages"..."40 Ounce Remix"..and "Never Forgotton" and leave some feedback yo

it was straight.....

No real punches or creativity, but it flowed real well, 6/10, work on ya wordplay an you'll be good ta go

Peace

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