it seems 2 b evathang i do, & evawhere i go
my good works & talents always seem 2 b unshown
i get bad press wheneva i try 2 do sumthin good
also i get stereotyped just cuz i'm a brotha from da hood
so i just keep 2 myself & walk around wit my head down all day
then people got da nerve 2 ask me, "Y I Bring Static 2 Those Who Look At Me Da Wrong Way"
what can i say it'z in my blood & the way i was raised
"White Society" dealt me a bad hand so i just play the cards i was gave
this is not a feel pity 4 me joint it'z like not that at all
just wanna let u know that whateva goes up is gonna fall
so in this life i lead evaday is a test of living in monstrous
this is just a short journey of going thru my "Mental Darkness"

leave ur feedbacc & let me know what u think

mayne c'mon all y'all i know seen diz here & read it, i can't get ne feedback on this dat'z fucced up uppin this 4 sum feedbacc

im feelin this shit
like how everything has a nice even flow
i like the vocab
i like the subject that u talked about
but u could of made it a lil longer
but overall it is pretty good
ill give it 8/10
return the favor
link in sig holla baq

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