iight listenin as typin....
first dude kinda sounds goofy, no hatred- i mean before spitting, his voice sound goofy like he forcin something... first cat comin on the track... decent prescence, could use a little more, flow is boring- very commercial, very basic, lyrically its an mtv track- nothing out of the ordinary, not bad, but just not my style. Second cat- sound very similar to the first cat only your voice is lighter. Your flow is a little less fluid as well- got the right idea just need more practice... Hook, its pretty cool with the female voice in the background, 3rd cat - best presence i think so far, his diction is very good, Im understanding every syllable, no surprises here either... I think some more complex verses woulda really set this off w/ some crazy wordplay or something to grab my attention, I understand its a girly track for the ladies, but you can still come with a verse for the emcees listenin... stay up fellas... 1

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