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02-20-05, 08:40 PM | #1 | ||||||
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My My My (drop linkz) a song we performing
IP: 1BD5 13B2
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iight drop linkz and ima reply the same day if not, the next day, we're performing this track at a club, tell me how the you know the crowd will like it Verse 1: Es Judah Verse 2: Lenny Blaze Verse 3: Yung Ace please dont reply with a "nice track" and expect me to do a full response back Leave feedback on 2 tracks and PM me, I will unlock this thread for you Last edited by SevenThird : 02-21-05 at 10:18 PM. |
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02-20-05, 08:56 PM | #2 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 2FD5 47F6
Right off the bat, it doesn't seem like a club song to me. Sounds like a nice track to do at a show, but not at a club. At a club I would expect a little more hype of a song. The song is tight though......you might say jea a little too much though.....lol.
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02-21-05, 09:50 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
thanx man, uppin this
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02-21-05, 10:02 PM | #4 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
OH WHAT WHAT LENNY BLAZE IN THIS TOO...haha thaz dope....he anotha dope nigga from hamilton..he lives like down the street from me...word dup....its carlin fam..waz good...
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02-21-05, 10:17 PM | #5 | |||||
The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: 13A4 AD49
iight listenin as typin....
first dude kinda sounds goofy, no hatred- i mean before spitting, his voice sound goofy like he forcin something... first cat comin on the track... decent prescence, could use a little more, flow is boring- very commercial, very basic, lyrically its an mtv track- nothing out of the ordinary, not bad, but just not my style. Second cat- sound very similar to the first cat only your voice is lighter. Your flow is a little less fluid as well- got the right idea just need more practice... Hook, its pretty cool with the female voice in the background, 3rd cat - best presence i think so far, his diction is very good, Im understanding every syllable, no surprises here either... I think some more complex verses woulda really set this off w/ some crazy wordplay or something to grab my attention, I understand its a girly track for the ladies, but you can still come with a verse for the emcees listenin... stay up fellas... 1
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