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03-08-05, 03:48 PM
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Dex vs Kordozar
IP: C295 AD2A
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6 - Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting[/Color] Minimum posts to vote: 450 Check in by: 03-09-05 at 12:08 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win |
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03-08-05, 04:53 PM
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IP: C295 AD2A
Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-05 04:53 PM.
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03-08-05, 05:03 PM
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IP: C295 AD2A
Studies Hamoprhodytes,His Punches Works Off Ciaras 1 2 Step...
Not Juss Me The Average Card Player Then Put A Finger In "Dex"... He's Gay His Occupation Says That He Only Owns Two Men Stop Rapping Even You're Aliases Doesn't Know What It's Doing Ukessex,The Dex,Weedex In Other Words He's All Trash.. I Only Say He's A Pussy Because Thiss Homo Was Born Without A Ball Sacc...
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03-08-05, 07:28 PM
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IP: C2DF 7A85
Dex has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-05 07:28 PM.
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03-08-05, 07:38 PM
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Gods Of War! -yeah im one
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IP: C2DF 7A85
Battle of six lines, My sick lines will spit shine
Ur greatness is fake shit, each lyrics a crime Signed rappers in ur town, shit that’s too rare Where the men are men, and sheep are scared! He preaches to masses of asses forming a line And battles like an assassin.. always from behind
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03-08-05, 07:42 PM
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Lyrically Unchallenged
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IP: 2AF4 5C39
Voted For: Dex
you got this man you both came weak but you made more sense in your rap scheme any way better multis punches structure and opener and closer were better Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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03-08-05, 07:44 PM
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What Tha Hell Diccsuccer??
Don't Vote Bitch Ass Nigga You Wacc And You Don't Know How Ta Vote??Lmao Uppin..............
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03-08-05, 08:40 PM
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Yea.. Im Still Dope ! !
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Dex
Dex: Battle of six lines, My sick lines will spit shine Ur greatness is fake shit, each lyrics a crime ^^dope multies 8/10 Signed rappers in ur town, shit that’s too rare Where the men are men, and sheep are scared! ^^lmao funny bar 7/10 He preaches to masses of asses forming a line And battles like an assassin.. always from behind ^^ good closer 7/10 Overall : 22/30 (73%) Kordozar: Studies Hamoprhodytes,His Punches Works Off Ciaras 1 2 Step... Not Juss Me The Average Card Player Then Put A Finger In "Dex"... ^^dope meta decent set up 8/10 He's Gay His Occupation Says That He Only Owns Two Men Stop Rapping Even You're Aliases Doesn't Know What It's Doing ^^ ehh decent 6/10 Ukessex,The Dex,Weedex In Other Words He's All Trash.. I Only Say He's A Pussy Because Thiss Homo Was Born Without A Ball Sacc... ^^good closer 7/10 Overall: 21/30 (70%) Vote: Dex Return the favor with an honest vote please!! http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=2011362 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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03-08-05, 09:01 PM
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IP: 9145 1B7B
??ThaFlow Fa You Ta Be A Vet You Mad Dumb If You Think He Won..........
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03-09-05, 04:14 AM
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Gods Of War! -yeah im one
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IP: CD98 49E3
amn it bro i know they aint explaining this shit properly, but who does anymore?
lets not make this an epic bro. Votes are votes... for you or me
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03-09-05, 05:44 AM
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This was feedback posted for Dex
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ok you win nuff siad
you had hella multies which where honestly all wack, but your strucuture was decent, could have used some personals and some wordplay or atleast have some punches, your whole verse was fucking fillers, try to eleavte alot more, once you get about 30 wins you will be good, just stay up and dont leave the site becuase you will eleavte soon enuff Kordozar...Ok that font color shit was wack you need to first fix that then go back and work on your strucuture you the prime example on why records are worthless, alos you had some decent shit but you loose becuase your font color and your strucuture, nuff said |
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03-09-05, 09:11 AM
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Gods Of War! -yeah im one
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IP: CD98 49E3
^^damn it ho, why didnt u vote????????????????????????????????
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03-10-05, 05:52 AM
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Gods Of War! -yeah im one
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IP: CD98 49E3
uppin for a blatant win.,............................................. ..
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03-11-05, 06:28 AM
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Gods Of War! -yeah im one
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03-11-05, 11:00 PM
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Voted For: Kordozar
Kordozar Nice Verse Man You Had Some Cool Punches Very Creative On This One, Personals Was There Man I Was Feeling Your Vocabulary, Structure Man It's Cool One Stretched Line That Was Your Closer, This Verse Was Dope For A Come Back, I Was Feeling The Opener The Most Nice Dex It Was A Cool Verse, i Wasn't Feeling The Personals Though, And The Punches Wasn't To Great, But It was Hitting, Structre, I See You Elevated On That, One THing Man Vocabulary You Need To Up That, And Change Up Your Rhyme Scheme, And You Could Add Some Meta's To Make It More Dope Vote-Kord Yo RTF On Me VS Lingustics, Not The One In My Sig Yo, And Explain It To, Me Vs Linguistics, I'll Up It So You Can Find It Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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