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Old 02-22-05, 06:01 PM   #1
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Old 02-22-05, 06:57 PM   #2
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listen while i type....

oh yea I hate this beat from hearing it on the radio, at least that annoying bitch aint singin on it ... flowwww, is on beat, proper lyrics but your voice is real monotone(low) and I dunno if its a reverb or you dubbing your vocals but it sounds weird in spots. You got the writing aspect of it down, just practice more with your delivery and keep upping the vocal prescence cuz right now it kinda lacks... keep droppin 1.
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Old 02-22-05, 06:58 PM   #3
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fo real? ight i might have to re-record dis then
more feed plz
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Old 02-22-05, 09:03 PM   #4
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ok I re-did it
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Old 02-22-05, 09:32 PM   #5
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this shit is dope to tha fullest man... love that beat and you murdered it... tight flow and some dope ass vocab and wordplay... shit was dope like findin a streetpickle wit whipcream on top son! and that is weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerd
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Old 02-22-05, 09:37 PM   #6
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SC link wont open up for me

Says page unavailable or w/e
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Old 02-22-05, 09:38 PM   #7
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That was hot, i like da flow on da beat..........keep it up..............check out my new songs too...............http://www.soundclick.com/bmoresmafia
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Old 02-23-05, 07:30 AM   #8
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umm bullzroc4lyfe that nigga a fake..he tryina tell me to join his label and shit haha
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Old 02-23-05, 10:07 AM   #9
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^ jea mayne i think so
something dont seem right about him lol
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Old 02-23-05, 11:04 PM   #10
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You already know what i think.......hottest song thats a solo song right now......you know
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Old 02-24-05, 07:16 PM   #11
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UPPN dis shIIIIIII
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Old 02-28-05, 06:03 PM   #12
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can i get some feed... jesus lol
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Old 02-28-05, 06:12 PM   #13
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lol..i love this beat man..

"like cristine,i wana add a "million" TO MY NAME>>>nice shit man,flow is tight lyrics ios nice,hook is ok..if i had to criticize any i'd say go deeper w the lyrics,cuz that was the only line that realy stood out but,everyone has their own this so...wasa real nice overall
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Old 02-28-05, 06:18 PM   #14
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ight u need to work on your emotion u sound real dull homie...your delivery is aight but that needs work to...i ripped this beat i should post that next show u how its done...lyrics are aight nahmean this was a solid drop nahmean...my shit was more on some remix shit ashanti did most of the track lol...but stay up aight joint just work on that delivery and emotion..


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you'll prolly have a diffrent opinion about me from my last drop listening to this joint right here peace
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Old 03-14-05, 06:05 PM   #15
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ight i just redid dis song, betta quality, diff mic
diff lyrics for da most part
holla
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