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Old 03-14-05, 09:57 PM   #1
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INFLUENCE....Ft. Dabatos

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i was 6 years old when i first started listening to rahkim
His raps was so lyrical preached, his music was so orginal
Who Invented "compound verses" yeah it was created by him
Godly in every aspect, his lyrics, are so mentally physical
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Man every song by him hit my heart, it was like strictly poetry
Many rapper'z today can't even do that, cause his skillz to hot to touch
rahkim the most original, forever more the greatest than 2-pac and B.I.G
Jay-z "the greaterst rapper of all time" pshh how? He Bitted rahkim's stuff
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I'm stacting the fact's cause he's my all time rapper, this is mista his number 1 fan
......................When he dies catch me out at his funereal with a lighter in my hand


How he influenced you...........

He's the person why i started rapping in the first place
Me too wanted my voice to be heard out in the world
So i started sitting by my boomboxx and hitting the pad with ink everyday
At the same time, started doing poetry my emotions were pure
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And like to be different from other's that's why my style is like this
You have to understand the definition of hip-hop is original
Writing in a poetry style in a open mic text, Meh it's a dope twist
Rahkim showed me that, and i'll keep doing it until my funereal
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This is mista signing off, rahkims number 1 fan
Catch me in the crowd at his funereal with a lighter in my hand


Dabatos-


One of the greatest rappers of all, most omnipotent..
Just like me, has the illest rhymes, but looks innocent..
Hated on by all, always taking all the criticism..
Just cuz he dissed from dikes, to really obsessed Christians..
Listen, he stayed who he was, doing something different..
Atleast he wasn’t like Michael, raping little boy infants..

The year 2002, the beginning of a star rapper..
Motivated to write, influenced by Marshal Matters..
Writing twenty four seven, Rhyme’s won’t forget em..
Rhyming like, Lord I met him, while dreaming I was in heaven..
Giving myself lesson’s, learned my rhymes are my expressions..
Participate in freestyle lessons, then became my own obsession..
Imagine I was in front of a crowd, freestyle towards my mirror..
Saw my future come nearer, destiny start to come clearer..
Emcee’s start to be queerer as I just began to elevate..
Dirty South came along, as real emcee’s went and fade..
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Old 03-14-05, 10:01 PM   #2
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Old 03-14-05, 10:04 PM   #3
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Old 03-14-05, 10:07 PM   #4
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wow this piece was pretty nice.. dabatos you pretty much came fire the whole way thru.. nice flow by both.. lyrical content was nice.. but again mista your rhyme scheme just doesnt sound good.. thats good for a poem.. but an Open Mic.. it just doesnt really fit well.. i told u this before but i guess u liek it.. it makes u original so its all good.. nice piece guys.. pz..
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Old 03-14-05, 10:09 PM   #5
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wow this piece was pretty nice.. dabatos you pretty much came fire the whole way thru.. nice flow by both.. lyrical content was nice.. but again mista your rhyme scheme just doesnt sound good.. thats good for a poem.. but an Open Mic.. it just doesnt really fit well.. i told u this before but i guess u liek it.. it makes u original so its all good.. nice piece guys.. pz..



I'll keep this style up and i bet you i make it to the top


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Old 03-14-05, 10:48 PM   #6
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thats some hard hittin shit man i liiked it nice structure all id expect from ya man gimme a holla man we should collab togetha man
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Old 03-14-05, 11:24 PM   #7
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