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03-24-05, 03:37 AM | #1 | |||||
Play Nice or Play Dead
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Harley Spits
IP: 0825 899A
My first official drop on RV.
sorry ive been hella busy. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=182749 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=183314 10 bars of fun please dont take nothing I say here to the head...im not aiming it at anybody. these bitches and niggas hatin I guess im the appointed hag im the type to smother all these dumb hoes with a poison rag arsenic, ether, chloraphorm, and im not even a violent bitch i know yall niggas wanna be IN just like that verizon chick chi-town reppin, they call me Harleen last name Quinzelle see me droppin all of yall like calls on sprint cells got much in common with cappadonna, cause u know I slang editorial niggas battle me, they faced with more el's than spanish tutorials (L's) got ya runnin scared, afraid to take a loss to anyone in my gender yall played lines have been in more bars than relapsed AA members thinkin im some cutsie girl, nigga ive earned stripes with spits everytime i battle males, all yall can come with is dykes and dick come with original, nobody wanna read about you E-thuggin it! basic rhymes from mcdonalds like..pa da pa pa pa...im lovin it! im livin the life, attracted by the allure, the way jay personified it been observin the way yall herbin, unnervin, just walk on by like isaac females can get it also, talking all that yak, bitch im quick to dead it attention hungry, come online to raise ya self esteem dam, how pathetic just watch ms. harley work, sit back, relax and have yourself a molson ice so i think im done here, my breif introduction into the world of open mic shout out to jimmy pockets, lady fiya, drama queen and payday. holla @ ya girl!
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03-24-05, 12:16 PM | #2 | |||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
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niggas be sleepin
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03-24-05, 01:09 PM | #3 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: 9AB5 3E19
got much in common with cappadonna, cause u know I slang editorial
niggas battle me, they faced with more el's than spanish tutorials (L's) got ya runnin scared, afraid to take a loss to anyone in my gender yall played lines have been in more bars than relapsed AA members ^Loving those lines, actually made me laugh This was cool drop girl, stayed quite consistent with good punches, nice wordplay and just a perfect example of how to brag and boast in a humorous sort of way. Vocab was nice and I was definately feeling your flow. Just keep it up girl, I know you got more in you than just one quick drop like this. But I enjoyed reading this, flow made it easy to follow and you had some dope shit in there. Keep going! DQ
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03-24-05, 01:10 PM | #4 | ||||
Back....
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IP: 84C5 840E
DQ check out my OM.
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03-24-05, 01:16 PM | #5 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: 9AB5 3E19
^Yes sir if you give this girl some feed!
DQ
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03-24-05, 02:44 PM | #6 | |||||
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IP: 0825 899A
thanks for the feedback.
uppin^^
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03-24-05, 06:53 PM | #7 | |||||
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IP: 3240 794D
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come on now
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03-25-05, 04:09 PM | #8 | |||||
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IP: 0825 899A
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thats a dam shame.
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03-25-05, 04:10 PM | #9 | |||
Get Stomped.
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IP: 4DB4 1669
yeah ma good drop feelin everything nice flow even keep it up ma yo holla on aim or msn
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03-25-05, 11:13 PM | #10 | ||||
www.militantmusic.com
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IP: 0D7D AAF7
damn u got some skills nice flow good structre rhymes were insanesome of the best ive seen honestly good shit 8.5/10
please return the favor in one of my open mics links in my sig
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03-25-05, 11:15 PM | #11 | ||||
www.militantmusic.com
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IP: 0D7D AAF7
come stop by the crew rap jaudderneutz u in if u wanna join
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03-26-05, 12:52 AM | #12 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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IP: 8E7F 1337
yo..u did really good for ur first open mic...7/10 u good enough ta join our crew ma...damn we need a girl in our fam.
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03-26-05, 01:51 AM | #13 | |||||
Play Nice or Play Dead
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IP: 0825 899A
thank you thank you
thanks for the feedback. im touched
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