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I Want You Back.......
IP: EA72 FF7D
*Speaks in a high pitched Voice*
How the hell could you do this SHIT?!? I Dont FUCKIN Understand!! I WAS the dominant one in this relationship, I HAD the upper hand But then you called me yesterday, and Splattered our Hopes Of Marriage, Making Babies, A Pickett Fence, I KNOW the pain shows! BUT...i try to keep it concealed...so my friends dont know the deal I talk about it to 1 MAN i confide in...I cry to him and let it spill cause he's the only one i can trust...he loves me and always has he wishes i was with him instead...but he keeps his feelings bagged NO i wont tell you who HE is...you STUPID Son Of A Bitch!!! I swear to GOD i Love You SO Much..But you Can Burn in Hell Prick! I FUCKIN HATE YOU!...No i Love You...i want you back...but I dont I want you to Love Me Back! Then Again...i Hope You CHOKE! WHY do i have to love a man thats wrong for me? PLEASE tell me why why do i have to love a SNAKE?!?!...why cant i go for the Nice Guy? the one thats always there to talk to me in my time of need... the one that would die for me in an Instant...but i Guess its my greed... I want what i cant have...of course...thats how it always works I mean...im a WOMAN..which means..fuck being happy..id rather HURT! SOOOO...Fuck the nice guy that Loves Me...i want the ASSHOLE! I want the displeasing cheater that dont care...he makes me Whole cause im a Woman...im a Bitch...im a typical Female...I'll Remind Ya That I HATE the NICE GUY....Why? Because i have a Vagina! *Deepens Voice* WHO the Hell is this Nice Guy you speak of? You Better Tell Me Or i'll track his ass down anyways...trust me...its gonna get Ugly cause i dont want you confiding in another male, are you insane? i know i Dumped you Slut...but i still have you hooked to a Chain WHys that? Because i treat you like shit so you'll love me It works Dont It? THATS RIGHT it works...my plan is lovely see...what i do...is chew you out every day of your life then youll eventually like me enough...ill make u my wife... then when we get married...ill start being nice to you again so youll turn your love into hate....everythings gonna take a spin but it dont matter...because that ring is still gonna be on your finger which means your stuck with me....but my plan...it get Meaner... YEA....ill give you everything you want...like a nice guy would so then youll definitely hate me forever...youll despise me for good why would i do this? because thats the way of the world..its a stunt you want what u cant get....and get what you dont want *Goes back to regular Voice* Now...just to let everyone know...everyone thats reading this I AM the Nice GUY!...yea..the better i am..the worse it seems to get I Love her..and she love me too...just not in the same way SO i talk to her about her problems...every DAMN DAY! When i know i could solve her problems..if she came to me but she wont...i only wish she had the same beliefs but she dont...sometimes i sit and just wonder why? WHY? HAHA...becuase....i AM the NICE GUY! yo i know this may be a lil confusing...but....oh well...youll be ok
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Ike
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IP: EA72 FF7D
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 997D A94C
hmm well it sounds like your gay the way you talk about this guy, but why switch it from a guy to a gurl i dont get it but the story was interesting and shit the imagery was very good. just a kinda twisted story but i liked it. the vocab coulda been upped but your such a good story teller you got me to read it. the emotion was very well in use good job with that and overall i was feelin this just up the vocab a little more. 1
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a.k.a prozak
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IP: 865C 284C
it doesnt really rhyme all that much but i guess it'll sound better wit audio...it kinda sounded eminem-ish more like the song "kim" but it was cool up ur vocab more on this though and it be aight 7/10....
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Ike
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IP: EA72 FF7D
fuck yall for not responding to this shit....damnit lol uppin
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Ike
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IP: A8DD 1517
your all cocksucking whores.......
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