Calm

I’m sick n tired of being sick n tired. I mean it
I was born into hell I felt the heat inside as semen
Soldier bodies leaning the coldest eyes are seeing
3rd person sight as the soul inside is leaving
not only lives are being snatched high from Mee-in(men)
Morals have capsized and we chastise our women
And they say “Sky’s the limit” now that’s lies cuz listen
They stopped using wool now they drape eyes in linen
So we look “Right” at winners and “Left” prizes hidden
Then we’re “Back” at square one with those slight beginnings
Then move “Forward” to where we might be driven
By lively villains to various unsightly endings
But that’s like concealing the true light within us
Blast causing spark to take us right right through ceilings
Then lay claim to the blessings God has given
We are his children yet in still we hardly chillin
We struggle every day look how hard we living
Even the most prominent are still starving niggas
Just a mob of niggas looking for larger figures
In the process of sinning I hope God forgive us…

left feed on Sinn's piece "When the Sun Goes down"
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=185568

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wow, calm, this was pretty koo, i was feeling it , the
way you approached your topic title,..."sick of it"
with the directional content"left"right"center"back"
like a confuzed sickness..=sick of it. well that how i interpretated it
vocab was good, along with you ryhme scheme, which ive never read b4...weird cuz it wasnt normal, yet it didnt fall off,...
ya im kinda "speechless on this"...doesnt happen often...well done fam

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

Kawn Flixx

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Calm

i dropped links

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Ysdat

This topic is nice. good lyrics thru the whole peice nice emotion.

TC!

sinn

hahahahha yall are for real.....like seriously????? u gon say this shit is better then my shit....come on mane u drop the n-bomb even tho u aint prolly black, hahaha and look


3rd person sight as the soul inside is leaving
not only lives are being snatched high from Mee-in(men)
Morals have capsized and we chastise our women
And they say “Sky’s the limit” now that’s lies cuz listen
They stopped using wool now they drape eyes in linen


hahahah YO n u talk bad on my shit?????? mee-in??????? hahahahahahha damn son yall be talkin all that bullshit when all u do is rap bout bullshit AND DONT EVEN DO THAT GOOD

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for all these niggas that say i cant rap, nigga i dont rap any way, i ROBBBBB
-crunchy blac(three 6 mafia)


i get high like the birds and the planes, i get high when bullets hit faces after words are exchanged
-styles p(the lox)

u betta tell yo man wit the gauges im nice, i'll shoot up yo white shirts till yall look like dice
-I 20

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you got no clue ^^do you?..you see his rec n him droppin on a topic
n you automatically think your better,..wow, the ignorance of some kids
these days, ill tell you what...battle calm...n try to actually throw a punchline
in your verse.....i dare ya kid.........hell battle any1, you dont have
what it takes to win a battle from what ive read in you open mics
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that is all, now stop hatin on peeps or bones will bann ya ass

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
.
.
fake fucks..move on...!

Ysdat

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upping for fam

Dirty Nigga

first time besides a couple of punchlines on MSN that i saw your stuff Calm
topic of the peice was good, an you followed it all the way thru with consistant vocab, an meaningful rhymes, flow was on point, an u barely worded antyhin incorrectly, on the whole everythin was strong in the peice...keep 'em comin fam, Peace.

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Calm

i wouldnt expect sum 1 as wack as u to understand anything written in this verse. so i forgive your idiotic ignorance

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Speats

pretty dope ass vocabulary,very nice structure,very nice everything,keep it up man

Calm

thanx fam... new joint coming today

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