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View Poll Results: Pyronix vs MaRVJay1009
MaRVJay1009 5 100.00%
Pyronix 0 0%
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Old 04-13-05, 02:01 PM   #1
Pyronix
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From: United Kingdom.
Pyronix vs MaRVJay1009

IP: B6C6 4F1F

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Old 04-13-05, 02:03 PM   #2
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Pyronix has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-13-05 02:03 PM.
 
Old 04-13-05, 02:22 PM   #3
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Old 04-13-05, 02:23 PM   #4
MaRVJay
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From: NyC,QUeENS EaRLy!
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another alias homo.....

dis fag made an alias da BaTTLE NOOBS cuzz he sound real gay on a beat.
its like u "talk 2 god with ya knee's on a calender" cuzz u "pray on da week".
if i aint nice y u hate 4 chump?,dont get ya ass wiped and face all lump'd.
give up y have a rap career when u "wont go far" like a "baseball bunt".
pyronix u really boin marv,get off my dick do somthin go call a broad.
u gon win dis battle? lol nope only "MJ u'll eva RIP" is a "jordan card".*
matter go call ya squad..cuzz punches weak u like rocky in his first fight.
u'll neva have $ ya "road da riches" gon be "shaky like ali on a dirt bike.

*my initals r MJ..u'll get da rest
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Old 04-13-05, 02:29 PM   #5
Pyronix
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Your rec's huge though, so I advise Marv to stop n lay low.
Marv's gettin the wind knocked out of him, better yet a tornado!
I mean, over 30 wins? I guess, your text is getting kinda dull.
And yeah, I am hitting rock bottom, punching the base of your skull.
Don't questio nthe illest style, cuz I'm the best of sonning, while..
Your just a paedo, who attempted to molest his inner child.
I told you your lacking fizz, ya get the voters gasps, sucker.
But it's deff not in awe.....It's from RV's asthma sufferers.
 
Old 04-13-05, 02:34 PM   #6
MaRVJay
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uuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Old 04-13-05, 02:50 PM   #7
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upupupupupupupupupuppupupupupupupupupupupupupupupu pupup.
 
Old 04-13-05, 09:35 PM   #8
MaRVJay
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here we go with dis not votin shit...uuuuupppppppppppiiiiiiiinnnnnn
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Old 04-14-05, 07:30 AM   #9
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

marv got this cuz of his punches...nice closer...nice werdplay...good structure...couldve used some multies or improved vocab though

pyronix, i wasnt impressed by this verse if u are an alias but the opener wasnt great and the closer was okay...good strucutre, but thats bout it for real...multies vocab flow and punches all cooodve been worked on in my opinion

both cood work on multies and vocab

v/marvjay1009

rtf..
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...19&page=1&pp=15

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Old 04-14-05, 10:21 AM   #10
MaRVJay
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uuppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Old 04-14-05, 11:04 AM   #11
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uppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn knew i should of raised da minimum posts to vote.
 
Old 04-15-05, 12:30 PM   #12
MaRVJay
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why???....when u only got 30 post.....fam dat alias shit is gay 4real
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Old 04-15-05, 01:44 PM   #13
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that vote wasnt really explained, but w/e.............upping
 
Old 04-15-05, 07:13 PM   #14
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppppp piiiiiiiiinnnnnnnn
 
Old 04-16-05, 12:20 AM   #15
MaRVJay
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IP: 5941 B316

come on with da votin shit...just accept it fam..........
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