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Old 05-02-05, 03:57 PM   #1
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Adrenaline= blue
Death= Red

he wakes up one morning and goes to use the bathroom,but doesn't see his reflection,rather a reflection of death...they start to battle for his soul...

"Adrenaline's" about to face a death "rush",head crushed
have his thoughts "inkin" red like bursts from "lead busts"
A-D shocks whole flocks,traps top flow's in headlocks
give death some "heart burn" wit more "holes" than tef's got

death is "colder" than the ice age,ur body will get frozen "blues"
I'll have ya "soul" trapped in more hole gaps than stolen "shoes"
I cause a harder "system crash" than "computer viruses"
leave dis victim slashed and "crossed" like "bones on pirates" is

I "own more lives" than "slavery",death's face u'll hate to see
and if ur life is a "dream" then that means u "wake" to me
Im a feelin u just cant stop,the rush will have u "rocked"
it's like gettin "stone-dashed" by folks who chasin cops

it's a fact "death kills",anything he touches "fades to black"
death's spits is like "mouth disease" cuz it's a "race of plaque"

it's clear I aint afraid of "death", im prone from bein "tragic"
that's why people "hate my rush",I got my own "hours in traffic"


Death'll put u to bed like the "sandman" except "sleepin" is forever
that means I "keep adrenaline",but do I "feel the rush"?...Never

Stop "recyclin" ur wackness,ur whole speech is "repetitive"
death is only "cold" cuz I keep the thought as mind "beverages"

well if you keep "death in your mind" then u must be "brain dead"
u never had a "chance" against me,it's "luck" ur still stayin as said

so if im still "standin here" then it proves u'll never be "rid of me"
I told u Im a feelin u "cant stop", hence the adrenaline "epitome"


death will be baaaack!! and I will have you!!!
please, i'll never leave I enjoy life,but thank you...

death fades away...adrenaline see's his reflection...starts brushing his teeth...end's smiling...
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Old 05-03-05, 01:00 PM   #2
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Old 05-03-05, 01:02 PM   #3
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Old 05-03-05, 01:19 PM   #4
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dis was hot...8/10...very good flow/structure...return tha fava...first link in sig

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Old 05-03-05, 03:51 PM   #5
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This was a pretty dope drop.. One of the best ive seen from
you adrenaline , i liked the comparision's you put in your drop
You had nice emotions , good feeling, some nice vocab
I felt you could have choose your worden alittle bettter. not have been some simple
Your structure was good , like how you were fighten death..
Best line of the drop i would have to say was:
"own more lives" than "slavery",death's face u'll hate to see
and if ur life is a "dream" then that means u "wake" to me
Im a feelin u just cant stop,the rush will have u "rocked"
it's like gettin "stone-dashed" by folks who chasin cops
nice this was a good bar...i was really feeling it ...
Overall good drop ... keep it up , and i hope to see some more from you
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Old 05-03-05, 04:03 PM   #6
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Old 05-03-05, 05:26 PM   #7
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that was fire man nice vocab good punches good flow and it was decent all around nice read and good drop fam 8/10

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Old 05-04-05, 12:10 PM   #8
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uppin...we can do better here...drop more feed please..favors will be returned
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Old 05-05-05, 10:17 AM   #9
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