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05-23-05, 06:51 PM
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Lyrics Put MCs On Atkin's Diet!
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AckRite vs Bernonedown
IP: 1E99 72C8
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8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Jea...G'Luck Dunn Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 05-23-05 at 07:21 PM Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in. |
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05-23-05, 06:53 PM
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IP: 1E99 72C8
AckRite has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-23-05 06:53 PM.
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05-23-05, 06:56 PM
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IP: 7C6D 1B8D
Bernonedown has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-23-05 06:56 PM.
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05-23-05, 07:06 PM
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IP: 7C6D 1B8D
T-money spits better shit and you cant outwit my english literature, too many words, your insecured, your lyrics are never heard or undrestood by my boys in the hood, we think your shit sucks, your outta luck, dont wanna fuck or start shit with me, a bitch always on his knees, doesnt take shame in his name but he needs to be tamed cause his lyrics are lame and cant compete in the rap game, or let his heart feel pain, but he does realize that he cant comprimise that T-money never shy's away, from any battle, especially one this easy to win, now what u gonna ask your DJ to spin?
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05-23-05, 07:15 PM
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IP: 1E99 72C8
Aha...Listen Kid
...Hide Ya Face In Shame Cuz, Readin Ya Lines Everyone Say Huh?... ...Bern....Cuttin Ya Chin Wit Ya Daughter Dont Mean U 'RAISED-HER'... (razor) ...Blaze Trees...He Smokey Da Bear!, Sutter Ali...Keep Shakin In Fear... ...Suicidal?!?...Must Have 'SHOT HEARIN'...He Got Da Gun 2 His Ear!... ...Got A Short Time illness...Sick In Da Head...Dis Brain Froze Psycho... ...Knows That His Mind Is Garbage.....No Wonder He Always Recycle!... ...Hooker Ya Sold Bars Aint A Threat....Unborn....U Not Harmin Me Yet!... ...I'm Holdin NIKES, So If I Cut Ya Lip...Ya Blood'll Flow Out In CHECK... EZ... (1) Razor...Raised Her (2) Ali Has Parkinsons ( So He Shakes ) (3) If I Cut His Lip Wit A Nike, His Blood'll Be Checked...Get It
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05-23-05, 07:17 PM
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IP: 1E99 72C8
VOTE UP............WDF Was You Spittin Bernonedown Lol
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C.S!....Crhyme Sindicate Quote:
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05-24-05, 02:40 PM
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This was feedback posted for Bernonedown
IP: 50E1 F494
Yeah, AckRite owned you easily...
Like woah.... |
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05-24-05, 02:45 PM
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NO SURRENDER
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IP: 828D 0B7A
Voted For: AckRite
ACKRITE TAKES THIS FOR ME, FOR STARTERS I COULD READ HIS VERSE AND WAS ABLE TO TAKE A BREATH.... WASNT FEELIN YOUR STRUCTURE AT ALL BERN... ALTHOUGH THERE WERE A COUPLE OF PUNCHIS HIDDED IN THEM WORDS THEY STILL WERNT UP TO ACKS STANDARD, HES LOOKIN GOOD AND ELEVATING. ACK GETS THIS DUE TO BETTER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND ME BIENG ABLE TO READ IT. NO HATE, RTF IN SIG.....I DONT WANNA HAVE MY VOTE DQED :THUMBUP:
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05-25-05, 04:18 PM
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IP: 7518 2F0A
Jea I Hope They Dont Take It Away..........Shit'll Take Even Longer 2 End...........UPPIN'
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05-25-05, 04:23 PM
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NO SURRENDER
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IP: 828D 0B7A
i explained it, plz rtf... .
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05-25-05, 04:24 PM
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: AckRite
.............this one i didnt really need to break it down. AckRite took this one, easily....but i'll break it down anyway.. ...Hide Ya Face In Shame Cuz, Readin Ya Lines Everyone Say Huh?... ...Bern....Cuttin Ya Chin Wit Ya Daughter Dont Mean U 'RAISED-HER'... (razor) --didnt really rhyme, but it was okay ...Blaze Trees...He Smokey Da Bear!, Sutter Ali...Keep Shakin In Fear... ...Suicidal?!?...Must Have 'SHOT HEARIN'...He Got Da Gun 2 His Ear!... --pretty decent ...Got A Short Time illness...Sick In Da Head...Dis Brain Froze Psycho... ...Knows That His Mind Is Garbage.....No Wonder He Always Recycle!... --eh, punch was okay ...Hooker Ya Sold Bars Aint A Threat....Unborn....U Not Harmin Me Yet!... ...I'm Holdin NIKES, So If I Cut Ya Lip...Ya Blood'll Flow Out In CHECK... --decent closer, couldve been harder though RTF AckRite on my battle against Khaoz.. or this vote gets removed
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05-25-05, 04:42 PM
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B.I.G.
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IP: 3E96 BB1E
Voted For: AckRite
GOOD: Flow - ackrite Structure - ackrite Punchlines - ackrite vocab - ackrite Wordplay - ackrite Nameplay - ackrite BAD: forced Rhymes - none Forced Multis - none Non Sence - none CREATIVITY Theme Battle - none Creative Punches - ackrite creative multi's - ackrite PERSONALS: "...Got A Short Time illness...Sick In Da Head...Dis Brain Froze Psycho... ...Knows That His Mind Is Garbage.....No Wonder He Always Recycle!..." OPENING/CLOSING: Opening: none Closing: bernonedown COMMENT: Your structure and flow was fucked up Bern, preschool vocab, ain't haitin but if you fix that structure you'll improve ur shit, try to have better punches.... V/ akrite RTF!!!!!
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05-25-05, 04:59 PM
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IP: 7518 2F0A
Jea Imma Return ALLLLLL Da Favors Dont Worry About It....I'm Lazy But I'll Check Ya Battles
UPPIN'
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05-25-05, 04:59 PM
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NO SURRENDER
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IP: 828D 0B7A
ight good lookin..................................
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05-26-05, 07:09 AM
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==bLaCk-HanD==
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IP: AEA1 84AB
Voted For: AckRite
...Hide Ya Face In Shame Cuz, Readin Ya Lines Everyone Say Huh?... ...Bern....Cuttin Ya Chin Wit Ya Daughter Dont Mean U 'RAISED-HER'... (razor) ...Blaze Trees...He Smokey Da Bear!, Sutter Ali...Keep Shakin In Fear... ...Suicidal?!?...Must Have 'SHOT HEARIN'...He Got Da Gun 2 His Ear!... ...Got A Short Time illness...Sick In Da Head...Dis Brain Froze Psycho... ...Knows That His Mind Is Garbage.....No Wonder He Always Recycle!... ...Hooker Ya Sold Bars Aint A Threat....Unborn....U Not Harmin Me Yet!... ...I'm Holdin NIKES, So If I Cut Ya Lip...Ya Blood'll Flow Out In CHECK... Dat ^ Vs.. T-money spits better shit and you cant outwit my english literature, too many words, your insecured, your lyrics are never heard or undrestood by my boys in the hood, we think your shit sucks, your outta luck, dont wanna fuck or start shit with me, a bitch always on his knees, doesnt take shame in his name but he needs to be tamed cause his lyrics are lame and cant compete in the rap game, or let his heart feel pain, but he does realize that he cant comprimise that T-money never shy's away, from any battle, especially one this easy to win, now what u gonna ask your DJ to spin? What Mo Can I Say? Vote/Ackrite, Fo Actually Dropping A Verse Plz Return Da Vote In Mah Signature Ackrite
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