http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/20grand.htm
MAry J beat

i got bored, self explanitory....


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191068
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190120

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

aight yo ya lyrics seemed a lil basic 2 me wasnt realli nothin i wuld brag bout quality was kool and ya flow on it was kool

For some reason it sound like your trying to deep by making ya voice deep

Cant say much but this but its a good freestyle you flowed on beat

not supposed to be mad lyrical.. its a freestyle....
thats my natural speaking voice actually, cuz i recorded this late last night

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

yo.....dope freestyle.......u dont scared to freestyle........keep it up......yo....

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peepin.. lol ur voice duz sound mad different on this lol duz sound like u tryin to come off deep or sumn.. damn that 2 burners line was another reuse same with swisher line... when u do ur pause then come back in its a lil better... speakers bleed line was a straight up bite tho... well this was alot different from ya normal shyt like i dunno if ur tryin sumthin different but ya voice seemed more REAL and Normal on this but soundin more geeky at tha same time, i dunnno how much of a FRee this was but seems like it was just thrown together real quick with some old recycled lines n thrown out, ferreal tha only advice i could offer is to start getting new material cuz u be usin ya lines over n over n over on everytrack, i actualy think i like this voice better tho, more natural, u seemed kinda monotone on sum parts tho lol at ur stop to talk about mike jones n collect ur thoughts lol i think this wasnt a freestyle but u shouldnt care what i think rite? word... drop sum new shyt tho..

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best Audio Head May- the Omen*

OMEN ON MYSPACE

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yo what up... hurry up an spit it... fuck a intro,... haha... flow is on point, hard not to be in a freestyle tho... lyrical is coo for off tha dome... keep it gutta...

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