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05-18-05, 11:17 PM
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20/20 VisioN
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Dreams REMIX ft. 20 GraND, S-Large and Doc
IP: E8C1 1330
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/20grand.htm
^^^ Dreams REMIX ^^^ pretty hott shit 1- 20 grand 2- S-Large 3- Doc Doc quality is bad we know.. lol LINKS: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190609 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190120
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05-18-05, 11:29 PM
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You Cant Handle The Truth
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IP: C17D 93EB
always liked this beat...
20G, likin' ya flow and ya lyrics are nyce...only thing is that you didn't stay on the same kinda topic the song's hook was fit for, but that's just personal rhyme...overall the verse was good despite the differentiated content... the hook, ya boi was off key but I'll assume he's not a singer anyway, lol... S-Large, vocals could've been a bit louder and more emotion in ya voice as well cuz this song is all about emotion... 2nd hook was better than the first one to me... Doc verse, like ya voice and your flow and emotion are both nyce...you definetly shined most on this one dude, keep it up... --GO REPLY ON MY SHIT DAMMIT--
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05-18-05, 11:34 PM
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Only the Illist
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IP: 8BC7 013B
yeah like she said "ive always liked this beat" tru dat!
listening........shit starts off dope.. flow is good... u said oxymoron AGAIN! gsus! lol jk.... ummm... im feelin the wordplay.... DSL line was meh.... chorus is good man im feelin that shit... Slarge did his thing... has good flow... i like his lyrics... all in all id say 20 ive seen better lyrics from u but it was still dope with wordplay and flow... chrous was dope... Slarge did nice as well...... OH WAIT SOMEONE ELSE!!!! dunno who he is... flow is ok... lyrics are basic... hes ok... has an ok voice... 20grand - 7/10 Slarge- 7/10 other dude- 6/10 |
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05-18-05, 11:38 PM
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.::Outside The Circle::.
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IP: A8DD 1517
always liked this beat too.....
20...verse is pretty dope here...u had some pretty clever lines throughout your verse....delivery was good....overall this was a good verse...nothin to complain about.... 2nd dude...so decent lines...flow is pretty good...delivery was ok...nothin great...it was good...but not great... 3rd...lyrics really arent impressing me at all....definitely needs to up em....flow is ok...delivery is ok...this verse wouldnt have been bad if the lyricism wasnt soo poor overall i was feelin 20s part the most...this was a good track...definitely worth a listen
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05-18-05, 11:59 PM
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tha illest
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IP: 3240 794D
mite as well peep im pretty bored....kanye on tha beat coo... damn ive heard u say that oxy moron line sooo many times... n taht make sence line... lines were pretty basic in this honestly not very much emotion on it but better than most of tha shyt on this site... dont like this second dude already, he sounds like he's just straight talkin not rappin....rappas study me line was his best his shyt was real basic... damn im yawnin this shyt is makin me tired... last guy is havin sum bad quality... his overdubs are off at sum parts, im feelin his part so far tha most, theres realy no flow in this that i can see, kilo's on tha beat is hmmm aight... on tha grind line was wack... damn i was honestly hopin to leave u some good feed seein as tha beef has died down but its probaly just me i dont really like this track tho, put me to sleep.... but drop sum more bangers soon..... g'luck
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05-19-05, 12:06 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: 666C F77E
i love this beat...20 u did ya thing on this...good flow...good lyrics, i'm liking the wordplay...so lyrical...lol, i enjoyed s-large's singing..."i'm thuggin"...funny shit....lyrics were good and ya flow was nice...i wanna hear more singing from ya...lol...j/k...doc..."empire records" tell me that's not cali's label but anyways...lyrics were pretty good...flow could have been a lil better but overall this was a dope drop
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05-19-05, 12:14 AM
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IP: 5BC3 7ACF
Yeah I already did this like...months ago.
Too bad it was garbage.
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05-19-05, 01:10 AM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 5CE5 0C44
the intro is wack....the uh, uh, uh is wack....20 g..I thought you'd change ya delivery one a beat like dis..."if it don't make dollas it don't make sense"<---how many times u dun said dat?...but the delivery was blan...usually u got a strong beat behind u so its a nice contrast but on this u needed more energy....large...awww son your even duller...an ya vocals are too low....lyrically not impressive son....ya lines was weak son...flow was repeitive too.....doc...I ain't feeling dis dudes voice...his flow is mechanical sounding....damn his lines is weak...shit is seriously played here...very generic sounding verse....an the delivery was blan too.....I wasn't feelign what y'all did wit da hook neither....I gotta say this was a disappointing drop from you 20 not up to par wit ya usual drops...no hate jus realness..u know son....stay up...1
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05-19-05, 02:27 AM
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FuxJustAWord
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IP: 3B27 2020
20 grand u needa change around ur voice or sumthin for this beat....... u sound all gangsta and shit, and that doesnt go along with the beat..... i wrote a song to this beat a real long while ago, so u know i always liked it too..... but my audio has been fucked so i never recorded it
......... it was a pretty decent track but it seems like u all talked about the wrong things on this track........ considerin how the beat goes....... i unno juist not feelin it with the whole thuglife on this shit |
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05-19-05, 05:13 PM
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20/20 VisioN
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IP: 5A3C 9780
jea we like to try new things, so we switched up the whole beat
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da916_nigga: ima slap it right now kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs |
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05-19-05, 05:26 PM
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L.E
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IP: 6022 FE6A
A'ight this was a pretty coo song...flow's good through out...the last guy...Oh my God....get better equipment...PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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05-19-05, 07:02 PM
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Don't Even Think About It
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IP: 7402 AF51
Wow this shit was real nice...
Quality was good, lyrics were nice, and flow for the most part was decent by all |
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05-20-05, 01:05 AM
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Home Of Philly
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IP: 9476 4854
aight yo on da real u sound like shyne mad real yo da otha nigga sound like sumbodi i 4got tho but ya verse was hot flow was good quality was good lyircs was good 2
2nd dude ya shit 2 me seemed like it had nothin 2 do wit da song but it was a cool verse lyrics was aight and ya quality was kool 2rd dude nahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh period yo ya lyrics was fukk nah wasnt feelin it yo |
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