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View Poll Results: Who's Verse I Better? | |||
First Verse | 5 | 55.56% | |
Second Verse | 4 | 44.44% | |
Voters: 9. You may not vote on this poll |
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05-25-05, 11:59 PM | #1 | ||
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Which Verse Won?
IP: 2029 97B3
Which Verse Won This?
First Verse Why aren’t you reppin Mindz Collide? Are you just ashamed to? N’ even if that bar was written to Untold..… it was ABOUT you! What the fuck’s apotheosis dude? Gettin a new name’s ya goal I got an idea that suits you well…….……… how about, apothole? Bow down n’ learn your role, unwanted faggot, you’ll never win Aurelius was born in the state of Rome…..ing for a home to live in Damn yo stop the bitchin’, how to beat me? Ya haven’t a clue Yeah you’re stumped…………….to the fucking tree I hung you to What to do, ya love life sucks, when ya girl needs money she calls But at least she’s a tiger in bed……......……….. stripes, claws, n’ all Second Verse Bars Is Weak Like Paraplegics, You In Denial Kid Don't Ignore Me Why Discuss How Whack You Are When You Just Did That For Me True Facts, When Da-Trus Spits, It's Like You Wish He Was Dead You'd Surround A Toilet Bowl, Mistaken I'll Leave Piss On His Head Your Verse Is Like Arm Amp's Punches Can Never Reach Existence Attempt To Be Gangster, And Did The Exact Opposite Of Resistance Like Circus Gimmicks Dick Riders Got This Faggot Juggling Balls Relief Of A Restroom Break Main F Had This Kid Fucking In Stalls Denied Me At-First,This Faggot Was Scared To Battle On RapVerse It 'Hurtz, Da Trus' In Other Words Displaying His Name Backwards And You Resemble Significance Of Marijuana, In Remaining A Herb Flow Is Like River Block Off's Your In Need Of Re-framing Ya Verse Your Wordplay Could Never Match Up, Like Straight To Bi-Sexual Throwing Your Life Away On Net Sites....Cuzz Life Is Text-To-You You'd Pre-Write A Verse, And Still Be Fucked Like In depth Gamblers Only Vote You'd Get Is From Your Alias, Downloading IP Scramblers His Precision Is Dimmed With For, Like The Ground On The Moon Explode His Mental's..........Left His Intelligence Around The Room This Kid's Verse Is Like A Mountain What Can't Be Found Is Pattern Stomach & Gas Relief Still Can't Spit Flames With A Jack-o-lantern
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05-26-05, 12:10 AM | #2 | ||
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IP: 2029 97B3
Come On Man Bumping This Thread Up...................
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05-26-05, 12:10 AM | #3 | ||||
FuxJustAWord
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IP: 3B27 2020
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ill just say the second one...... 1st one was ok...... but it seems like he had alotta personals i wouldnt get unless u showed me the other persons name, title, avvy and aliases maybe..... i unno
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05-26-05, 12:12 AM | #4 | ||||
FuxJustAWord
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IP: 3B27 2020
also......... the first guy did the same thing of the " blah.............. blah blah" and switchin the meanin of the first word concept like 3 times. Its aight the first time.... but having it more than that in a 5 bar battle is kinda stupid and not creative
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05-26-05, 12:12 AM | #5 | ||
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IP: 2029 97B3
First Verse DaTrusHurtz Second Verse Marcus Aurelius
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05-26-05, 12:13 AM | #6 | ||||
Non-Convicted Rapist
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IP: 1C00 CCA1
second one...who is who?
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05-26-05, 12:15 AM | #7 | ||
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IP: 2029 97B3
Read Up It'll Tell You
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05-26-05, 12:16 AM | #8 | ||||||||
Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: B3E3 2C43
Second one... don't know either of them.
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05-26-05, 12:18 AM | #9 | ||
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IP: 2029 97B3
Please Poll What You Said An Explain It's A Site Thing I Need Polls And Explanations
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05-26-05, 12:33 AM | #10 | ||
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IP: 2029 97B3
Bumping This Shit Man........................
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05-26-05, 12:39 AM | #11 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 477B D81A
well i'm gonna be cool and disagree with everyone..........
the second verse had a fucked up flow, with those stretched lines they need a few multies in there to help it flow better, also a lot of the punches used were not all that original, i have seen pre-writ ballz on loads of sites, also that juggling ballz line along with the fuckin in stalls is not original at all. the first verse flowed a lot better and the punches were pretty funny, and they were actual punches, some of the shit in the 2nd verse seemed more like statements than punches!!!! so i wud pick the first verse!!! |
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05-26-05, 01:01 AM | #12 | ||||
leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 41CB B6A9
im gonna go with the first verse here as well..
second verse had a played punch for its opener n quite frankly was boarderline wack throughout i mainly say that cuz the content didnt flow well as punches...setups had nothin to do with the punch most of the time...... 1st verse had alot more creativity, although it didnt always come across as hard hitting, it had personals n was way more direct to the opponent........
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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05-26-05, 01:02 AM | #13 | |||
The Truth
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IP: 1094 EED9
Neither for the fact this has nothing to do with LL.
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05-26-05, 01:03 AM | #14 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 477B D81A
^^ you cant vote anyway
you have no text skillz.........WERD!!! |
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05-26-05, 01:06 AM | #15 | |||
The Truth
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IP: 1094 EED9
That bothers me Why?
Theres a reason i dont do text smart one.
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