Battle Rules:

8-14 UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No DCK RIDIN VOTES
NO BITING EITHER
Straight Battle!Know What I Mean!Lil bit Of Everything (Ex:PUNCHES,METAZ,PERSONALZ,...)

Minimum posts to vote: [b]50

Check in by: 06-14-05 at 01:27 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Ghost has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-11-05 01:28 AM.

Have Ya "down-n-Quick", not up n Runnin like Ya Internet connection
Watch Me KO you With "Votes",But Best Believe Im not Runnin For Election
Im Steady "Weldin" Rhymez Apart Quick,Cuz Supposely Ya Barz-of-Steel
i Advice You To bring paramedics,Cuz therez Gon Be Dozenz Of -Scarz-to-heal-
Complicationz Of Spitting,Like A Dry MOuth Of a Hard Workin Athletic
You should Retire BEING A ROOKIE,Cuz Ya Lyriks Are Just Plain Basic N Pathetic!
Use Ya Verse For Basic Teachin,But Use Ya Mettalic Remainz For CONFETTI
Like Jason,But Its a Mic Im Holdin To KILL You Niggaz, Not An Oversized Machetti
Have Ya Tongue-Kissin My "Nine",But Im Not Talkin About My "Erection"
Have Ya Cross-sided After This Battle,Cuz ima Have Ya "lookin" In 2 Different Directionz

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yo BARZ homie my badi was gettin caught up n shyt!my COMP RUNNIN slow!but i was typin my verse n when i fckin CLICKED POST VERSE! it said -Thread-Closed-!n i CANT FCKIN BELIEVE I GOT A LOSS FOR SOME STUPID BULLSHYT!but i wanna beat ya Fair n Square!so spit the same verse you posted in the last battle!GOOD LUCK!,LOL

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Hey its all good fam lets just do it again iight??

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.Barz Of Steel. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-11-05 09:57 AM.

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Good Verse Homie Well Ima Roll For A Lil Bit!N We Need Them Vote So UPPN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Word you to famz nice verse! Uppin this shit for some votes!

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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

Have Ya "down-n-Quick", not up n Runnin like Ya Internet connection
Watch Me KO you With "Votes",But Best Believe Im not Runnin For Election
6/10...Nice 2nd Line
Im Steady "Weldin" Rhymez Apart Quick,Cuz Supposely Ya Barz-of-Steel
i Advice You To bring paramedics,Cuz therez Gon Be Dozenz Of -Scarz-to-heal-
6.5/10...Good Shit Both Lines Were Straight
Complicationz Of Spitting,Like A Dry MOuth Of a Hard Workin Athletic
You should Retire BEING A ROOKIE,Cuz Ya Lyriks Are Just Plain Basic N Pathetic!
5.5/10...Nothin 2 Serious Rite Here
Use Ya Verse For Basic Teachin,But Use Ya Mettalic Remainz For CONFETTI
Like Jason,But Its a Mic Im Holdin To KILL You Niggaz, Not An Oversized Machetti
5/10...You Not Really Dissin Him Here Fam
Have Ya Tongue-Kissin My "Nine",But Im Not Talkin About My "Erection"
Have Ya Cross-sided After This Battle,Cuz ima Have Ya "lookin" In 2 Different Directionz
7/10...Nice Close But Da 2nd Line Was Strected

Good Verse...At Some Parts You Wasnt Dissin Dude Tho, Dats Da Only Bad Thing About This


I done tore this kid, lyrics swarmed this bitch
And please, you about as street, as a forest is
7/10...Nice Opener Good Meta
So dawg, don't be stupid, ya tough talk'll get beat stupid
Plus ya 'Tough Guy Front' is "Ghost" cuz I "See Thru It"
7/10...Anotha Good Line, Played On His Name
I'll put the nine to ya melon and lungs, this fella's a thug?
How? When he wouldn't "Lick A Shot" with the "Shell On His Tongue"
7.5/10...Lol Good Humor
So guy stop, this guy's hot? This kid'll get five shots
That'll leave his "casket in the clouds" Thats what I call a "Sky Box"
8/10...Tight Open Line & Closin Line
All your punches are half baked, He says he's real, but this cat's fake
So I'll leave this kid's "Body Sitting In a Bag" Like a "Sack Race"
6.5/10....Basic But Nice
This ho will get killed, how is this kid flowing with skill?
When my mama always told me as a child that a "Ghost isnt real!"
9/10...Nice Close & Play On Dudes Name

You Had 4 Da Most Part....Wordplay, Punches, Metas, A Few Personals Like Da Closin Line

Punches: Tie
Personals: Bars
Creativity: Bars
Wordplay: Bars
Structure: Tie (Both Were Eh)
Multiplez: Ghost (None Really)
Nameplay: Bars (Hit Harder)

OVERALL: Bars Of Steel...Cuz Of Da Harder Punches & Nameplay

RTF...Any Battle Namean

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LOl IIGHT THEN uppin!.....................................

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Voted For: Ghost

Have Ya "down-n-Quick", not up n Runnin like Ya Internet connection
Watch Me KO you With "Votes",But Best Believe Im not Runnin For Election
gud wordplay

Im Steady "Weldin" Rhymez Apart Quick,Cuz Supposely Ya Barz-of-Steel
i Advice You To bring paramedics,Cuz therez Gon Be Dozenz Of -Scarz-to-heal-
playing off d name was gud

Complicationz Of Spitting,Like A Dry MOuth Of a Hard Workin Athletic
You should Retire BEING A ROOKIE,Cuz Ya Lyriks Are Just Plain Basic N Pathetic!
dint like that bar

Use Ya Verse For Basic Teachin,But Use Ya Mettalic Remainz For CONFETTI
Like Jason,But Its a Mic Im Holdin To KILL You Niggaz, Not An Oversized Machetti
not a gud diss kind of played 2 b honest

Have Ya Tongue-Kissin My "Nine",But Im Not Talkin About My "Erection"
Have Ya Cross-sided After This Battle,Cuz ima Have Ya "lookin" In 2 Different Directionz
that wuz okay

your verse could of been bettr u had few dope lines but sum stuff was basic nd playd out yah mean


I done tore this kid, lyrics swarmed this bitch
And please, you about as street, as a forest is
no

So dawg, don't be stupid, ya tough talk'll get beat stupid
Plus ya 'Tough Guy Front' is "Ghost" cuz I "See Thru It"
wakk

I'll put the nine to ya melon and lungs, this fella's a thug?
How? When he wouldn't "Lick A Shot" with the "Shell On His Tongue"
it dint rhyme

So guy stop, this guy's hot? This kid'll get five shots
That'll leave his "casket in the clouds" Thats what I call a "Sky Box"
that was okay

All your punches are half baked, He says he's real, but this cat's fake
So I'll leave this kid's "Body Sitting In a Bag" Like a "Sack Race"
it dint rhym again

This ho will get killed, how is this kid flowing with skill?
When my mama always told me as a child that a "Ghost isnt real!"
okay?

weakk verse mane u had no personalz in d verse nd your punchlinez were very basic

my votes goes to ghost becase his verse had d more better personalz nd punchlines

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Voted For: Ghost

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Wait u can remove this i meant it as feedback sorry

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