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06-05-05, 04:18 PM
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NO SURRENDER
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K-trini Diss by Daubs.
IP: 828D 0B7A
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You been taken advantage of your whole life, your weak and have no respect.. Got no balls and couldn't take a reply, so decided to hate on someone dead.. ...And you got bullied at school, thats no suprise because all fat kids do.. Your so fuckin wack if you were a sports shop............................... .....................................I still wouldn't step into your shoes!! Girls are insensitive?, Na your just an ugly fuck who lacks any compassion.. And your verses must be dressed in red and green............................ ...................................The way they lack all senses of fashion!! And if your lifes is already hell,the way i own you, you can call me satan.. Herbs like him dissin me, im like misplaced cards........................... .............................................The way im losing my patience!! Left feed on: Kamze OM.
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06-05-05, 04:21 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: ECB3 36A0
Gud stuff Daubs
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06-05-05, 04:45 PM
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IP: 05CC A79B
Yo man you went hard on himm....dammm....you the man tho...good shit....liked the wordplay homie good drop....liked the way you did all that dots thing like:
Your so fuckin wack if you were a sports shop............................... .....................................I still wouldn't step into your shoes!! Makes a good effect.....RTF on my latest OM - Let Loose....link in sig
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06-05-05, 05:10 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 28AD 5545
dats wuzzup fuck his punk ass yo good shit man
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06-05-05, 05:17 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 828D 0B7A
And you got bullied at school, thats no suprise because all fat kids do..
Your so fuckin wack if you were a sports shop............................... .....................................I still wouldn't step into your shoes!! Nice liked it more cus it reminded me of the jae millz muder mook battle Why would i wanna step in his shoes? hes got athletes foot! anyway good diss keep up fam |
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06-05-05, 05:42 PM
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Just searching.
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IP: 0825 899A
Patience lines are played...doctors, cards. But still, straight drop and had its times. Short, but better then what he could do.
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06-06-05, 04:24 PM
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IP: 828D 0B7A
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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06-07-05, 04:38 PM
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IP: 828D 0B7A
feeeeeeeeeed bitchezzzzzzzz
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06-07-05, 04:50 PM
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Flyweight
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not bad
IP: AFBD 2333
overall it was decent, it wasnt consistant throughout the whole thing though, ill break it down
You been taken advantage of your whole life, your weak and have no respect.. Got no balls and couldn't take a reply, so decided to hate on someone dead.. ^^ I didnt like how that rhymed at all ...And you got bullied at school, thats no suprise because all fat kids do.. Your so fuckin wack if you were a sports shop............................... .....................................I still wouldn't step into your shoes!! ^^ very hot!! I loved the shoe line Girls are insensitive?, Na your just an ugly fuck who lacks any compassion.. And your verses must be dressed in red and green............................ ...................................The way they lack all senses of fashion!! ^^ eh, not very hard And if your lifes is already hell,the way i own you, you can call me satan.. Herbs like him dissin me, im like misplaced cards........................... .............................................The way im losing my patience!! ^^ decent, not too ill though Overall your 2nd part was the best, the 1st and 3rd were weak and the 4th was decent....keep doin ya thang |
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06-07-05, 04:51 PM
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IP: 828D 0B7A
ite good lookin, but in my accent the 1st bar definately rhymes
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06-07-05, 06:46 PM
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~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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IP: 2029 97B3
LOL (ROFL) Mayne Nice shyt Homie i Respect That!N He Gon Get A DISS From Me Homie!Holla Atcha Boy !
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06-07-05, 07:00 PM
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Semper Fi
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IP: 28AD 5545
lol it was sick homie..........took me a min to to get the structure down pack......but u shitted on that nigga thow..........keep doin ya thang homie
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06-07-05, 07:07 PM
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GG Haterz
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IP: F00F D7C1
Your gettin a lot better daubs. Decent diss, but you could have kept going. Work on your rhyme scheme.
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06-08-05, 09:19 AM
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Evolution
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
weerd man this was good... try to go for different styles indtead of using one fam... use better concetps for your punches though coz the ones ur using are pretty played... u had some dope shit in there i must admit keep droppin em homie...
U.K STAND UP!! |
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06-08-05, 11:08 AM
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Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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IP: 042E 9E4C
yeah daubs, lol I aint ur biggest fan but that was a decent diss like most others sed the shoe line was hot!
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