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R-Rated |
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5 | 100.00% |
Tekneek |
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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Tekneek vs R-Rated
IP: 2E7E 4D00
10 Lines Max 5 Votes Wins 3-0 Is A KO No Crew No Hate No D/R House Rules ~R~ Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 06-22-05 at 03:55 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
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IP: A6AC 0B1C
R-Rated has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-21-05 07:22 PM.
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IP: B1A5 868C
Tekneek has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 10:17 AM.
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 2E7E 4D00
Check It.. Kid You Rap With No Heart...Like Night of The Living Dead Organ Donars.. Your Pussy..Your Like A Transvestite Pimp The Way You're Forging Boners.. You Can't Stand My Weight..Like Bridges Not Made For 3 Ton Trucks.. Cause The Only Time You Handle Weight...Is In Your 3 Ton Fucks.. Your Like A Sports Coach...They Way This Pussy Is Pulling Strings.. But I Dont Mean Strings As In Sports...I Meant That Tampon Thing.. You've Been Fucked Since You Entered..Like Women Becoming Nuns.. and You Remind Me of Punk Rock Fans..They Way You Lacking Puns.. My Verse Will Leave Ya Mentally Fucked..Like John Holmes Get'n Head.. Plus Your Verse Has Less Action Than Two Homophobics In A Bed.. Chea Quick Key... ~R~ |
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[COLOR=Yellow][B]Tha People's Champ[/B][/COLOR]
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IP: B1A5 868C
I 'punch' like 'Tony Tarver* my 'hits jab' wit 'jaggid blades', 'fitted' wit~more~'ridges'~then~a~bag~ov'~Lays'
My rymes fully 'sarrated` to maximize 'damage~to~text' My lines pack muscle` your's cant 'manage~to~flex' 'Ravage necks' wit 'cut throat style` as I 'cratered~his~chest`'served' this hater like a 'waiter' and 'catered~his~flesh` Like a 'bag' on your 'head` i'll have you 'gaspin fo' breath` call me 'moses` I'll 'part' ya 'skull' and put ah 'gap~in~yo~head' Eat ya' 'heart whole' and leave you 'cast' like the 'dead~sea~scrolls' you 'bastard` get 'blasted' till ya 'head~piece~rolls' I'l leave you dazed and confused when I smoke~ya' ~herb` Abuse Flu' in boots' wit cali smiles** till' I broke~the~curb .................................................. ...................................... * AnTonio Carver ~ .... pro Boxer who recently defeated roy jones Jr. ** Cali smile ~ ..... Haveing to bite the curb while the back of the head is kicked in a downward motion into the curb! Thus leaving rip'd checks looking like an exaggerated smile... 99% of victims die from wounds or brian damage!
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-BTR-
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This was feedback posted for Tekneek
IP: 2029 97B3
nice battle fam....................................
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Classic
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: R-Rated
R-rated had a betta verse than tekneek he had punches that was hard hittin and made sense and his structure was good makein it easier to read his versei didnt really see any personals from neither of you only thang tekneek had was nice wordplay return the favor link in sig i will get the vote removed if the favor is not returned
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: D52C 04A2
R-Rated 1 and TekNeek 0 Upping For Votes. ~R~ |
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: CF73 089A
Voted For: R-Rated
I 'punch' like 'Tony Tarver* my 'hits jab' wit 'jaggid blades', 'fitted' wit~more~'ridges'~then~a~bag~ov'~Lays' My rymes fully 'sarrated` to maximize 'damage~to~text' My lines pack muscle` your's cant 'manage~to~flex' ^^flow good....but where's the punch? 'Ravage necks' wit 'cut throat style` as I 'cratered~his~chest`'served' this hater like a 'waiter' and 'catered~his~flesh` Like a 'bag' on your 'head` i'll have you 'gaspin fo' breath` call me 'moses` I'll 'part' ya 'skull' and put ah 'gap~in~yo~head' ^^again,got flow....but where's the punch? Eat ya' 'heart whole' and leave you 'cast' like the 'dead~sea~scrolls' you 'bastard` get 'blasted' till ya 'head~piece~rolls' I'l leave you dazed and confused when I smoke~ya' ~herb` Abuse Flu' in boots' wit cali smiles** till' I broke~the~curb ^^same thing as the other ones Just like in your battle with Pen&Paper...you had flow but really lacked in punches.Only problem this time is that ur battlin a skilled vet.Seriously.....work on your punches.Wordplay,metas. Kid You Rap With No Heart...Like Night of The Living Dead Organ Donars.. Your Pussy..Your Like A Transvestite Pimp The Way You're Forging Boners.. ^^Liked the 1st line...but 2nd was mediocre You Can't Stand My Weight..Like Bridges Not Made For 3 Ton Trucks.. Cause The Only Time You Handle Weight...Is In Your 3 Ton Fucks.. ^^didn't like rhmye scheme,but an ight punch Your Like A Sports Coach...They Way This Pussy Is Pulling Strings.. But I Dont Mean Strings As In Sports...I Meant That Tampon Thing.. ^^yo..period and tampon shit is played to death. You've Been Fucked Since You Entered..Like Women Becoming Nuns.. and You Remind Me of Punk Rock Fans..They Way You Lacking Puns.. ^^ighht My Verse Will Leave Ya Mentally Fucked..Like John Holmes Get'n Head.. Plus Your Verse Has Less Action Than Two Homophobics In A Bed.. ^^LOL...nice Well...far from ur best,but you claim it was keyed...so OK.Ur best line was the last one about 2 homophobics in bed.Ur worst line was tampon one.Flow was OK,structure was excellent.No blowin away punches in this bitch...but still enough to give ya the win. Vote-R-Rated(vote in link below) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851 |
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[COLOR=Yellow][B]Tha People's Champ[/B][/COLOR]
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IP: ECB3 36A0
aight uppin this.....................................
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real O.G
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IP: DBFA 3FE2
Voted For: R-Rated
werd ~R~-ok nice quick key had some punches in there and good flow and very nice structure. nothing overall bad in your verse just come a little harder tek- i don't like your stye but thats just me..i feel you need better punches that hit harder but good flow and weird but okay structure..but i felt R came harder wit better punches next time both come harder yall can do betta v/R
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