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Old 06-11-05, 12:27 AM   #1
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Well wrote this for a topical 7 months ago when i was weak.. or was new to rv.. i guess lol.. and i re-read it n was surprised i even wrote this..

Escape

I can't breathe, its just really too hard to believe,
Im runnin for my life, the dogs just been released..
I stop n get quieter, hear steps of one hunderd ppl...
Feel blazes of a fire n weapons made way 2 leathal..
I start runnin again cuz they just keep getting closer...
Shyt, One jst spotted me, thinkin my lifes already over...
They start chasin, sounds like a stampeed of animals...
Except they wanna kill me chasin me as if they hanibals
I tripped over a little branch, Shyt! I jst cut mah foot
U try runnin while limping, all of mah strength it took.
I Climb A tall tree, n js wait untill all them pass by
As I wait, i think in mah mind of my future great life
How unlike before, I could make good memories...
Get to live like humans, the life thats ment for me...
I move alittle, One guy says " I think I saw him"
Shyt and once again I gotta have another problem...
I jump down 2 da ground wit out making a sound..
head north where I can count on freedom 2 be found..
Still followed by dogs so need to get rid of my smell..
Jump in mud but its quick-sand I shoulda known well..
I pray for help as the sands already up to my shoulder..
My life passes by my eyes as if i survived n got older...
shyt get worst as I see a man in white comin towards me..
But I could tell he ain't bad cuz he dresses so poorely..
Then he takes a rope out and quickly throws it to me...
I grab it n he starts pulling, out of the sand i start moving
Now I know there's a Lord cuz who else coulda helped
It ain't a white man cuz they to busy countin their wealth
We arrive, I thank him cuz he walked wit me 2 da north
I say "thank God" he says "ur welcome" cuz he's the Lord


this is link to the battle i used this verse in
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142217

i'll get links in a sec
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Old 06-11-05, 12:39 AM   #2
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Old 06-11-05, 01:34 AM   #3
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