Battle Rules:

10 Lines
Crew Votes Allowed (*we in same crew*)
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No Dickriding
No Bullshit

3-0 =TKO!!!

*Let the Establishment boyz show y'all how to battle*

Minimum posts to vote: 600

Check in by: 06-10-05 at 02:46 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

King Solo has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-09-05 04:36 AM.

*steps up ready to chalk up another win*


Check it,
Ya audio is wack, that’s why they tried hidin ya tracks on the mix-tape..
Cudn’t get ya ‘shit on lock’ if ya ‘took a dump in a fuckin Scots lake’..
Ya text crew battles get you into heaven, I don’t mean ya spittin well though..
Its just ya put ya name up for a text spot, and everybodies like “HELL NO!�..
Try to hide bein a retard…switched the letters round to make ya name..
Name used to be half ‘text’ but ya still ‘lay’ it like ya usin’ half ya brain..
5 votes to win a battle…funnily enough Rated’s referrals have got 5 hits..
Not to imply that you cheat…more like why you still bringin more shit..
Like the shit in ya sig ya can’t ‘raise the bar’ cuz lyrically ya lines fall..
Forever dwellin’ on the past………………………………………⠀¦â€¦â€¦â€¦
Cuz vote-wise you’ll always be wonderin why ya never got five-for.. (5-4)



*now i'm tired of ppl readin my verses and sayin "ya lacked on personals" - there is a personal in every bar and i will explain them so you get it right*

EXPLANATIONS:
1st bar – referring to the thread Soc made about finding an R-Rated hidden track on the mixtape, also a Scottish Lake is called a Loch (pronounced lock)
2nd bar – past two crew battles Rated has been made to do topicals instead of text, wordplay is self explanatory.
3rd bar – R-Rated can be made into “Retard� if you switch the letters around, also personal on his other name ‘Lay-Text’.
4th bar – Rated has “5� referrals.
5th bar – On the bar shit he has in his sig, also the last time we battled I won 5-4 (and yes the last bar rhymes so don’t even try and say it don’t!!!!

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R-Rated has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-09-05 01:31 PM.

Did You Already Drop Your Verse Man??

It Says Three Posts....So If You Did I'll Go Ahead and Drop Mine Right Quick.

~R~

yep......mine is dropped..........................

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Voted For: King Solo

ight good battle fams... imma break it down...

R-Rated:

You Winning Hands Down??...Equipped Wita Solo King Back-To-Back...
Watch Me Draw and Fold Kings Quick..Rateds Facts Are Ace-Stacked..
^^ nice opener decent name play and good punch 8/10
Kid You Couldn't Knock Me Out...Even If You Were Jahovas Witness..
Could Lace Ya Punches With Disease..and Still Not Spit Verbal Sickness..
^^ second line=dope first line=irrelivent not bad though 6/10
Claim To Be The Open Mic Comdeic Genius...but Ya Speks Are Broke..
But I Guess That Name Does Fit You...Cause All Your Texts' A Joke..
^^ haha this one made me laugh 9/10
This Battle Is A Complete Upset..Like Premature Ejaculaters In Orgies..
And By Married To The Game..King Solo Will Be On Rapvese Till He's 40..
^^ not really feeling this couldav been alot better 5/10
I'll Pave A Highway To Hell In Chinese Subscript To Leave You Fo-Kissed..
You Claim The King Has Returned...It Must Hurt That Nobodies Noticed..
^^ this was dope good concept aswell 9/10

37/50

overall i felt u had a strong verse apart from a couple of your punches, you got good flow and good wordplay you could've won this if u made up for them two punches but you didn't so thats y im giving you the loss....

King solo:


Ya audio is wack, that’s why they tried hidin ya tracks on the mix-tape..
Cudn’t get ya ‘shit on lock’ if ya ‘took a dump in a fuckin Scots lake’..
^^ good opener decent personal and funny punch 9/10
Ya text crew battles get you into heaven, I don’t mean ya spittin well though..
Its just ya put ya name up for a text spot, and everybodies like “HELL NO!�..
^^ lol this made me laugh this was good 8/10
Try to hide bein a retard…switched the letters round to make ya name..
Name used to be half ‘text’ but ya still ‘lay’ it like ya usin’ half ya brain..
^^ i like the first line i really didn't get the second line 6/10
5 votes to win a battle…funnily enough Rated’s referrals have got 5 hits..
Not to imply that you cheat…more like why you still bringin more shit..
^^ nicee personal decent punch 8/10
Like the shit in ya sig ya can’t ‘raise the bar’ cuz lyrically ya lines fall..
Forever dwellin’ on the past………………………………………⠀¦â€¦â€¦â€¦
Cuz vote-wise you’ll always be wonderin why ya never got five-for.. (5-4)
^^ lol decent closure and good personakl on your last battle 7.5/10

38.5/50

ight man i felt this verse was strong, there was one line i didn't get but it don't matter coz the rest of the verse was good enough to see it through, you had some dope personals and some real good punches, i felt that the last line was strecthed a bit, wordplay was good and overall u did a good job....



ight this was a real close battle... im giving it to solo becuz he stayed more consistant and had more humour in his punches v/ solo

good battle fam u showed em how its done lol no hate pz

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Voted For: R-Rated

Lay- meh i have made this explanation on this battle like 4 times now every time i try to post you best bar it closes the window so here is a quick sum up... Lay your shit was better with the punches and the peronsals your best line was

Claim to be the open mic comdeic genius ... b ut ya speks are broke
But i guess that name does fit you... Cause all your test's a joke


King your ish wanst really that good to me man your flow was good and your stucture was a lil off.. punches hit but the personals wasnt the best and didnt reallty stik that well

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Voted For: R-Rated

imma brake it down bar 4 bar lyke errybody else do

Ya audio is wack, that’s why they tried hidin ya tracks on the mix-tape..
Cudn’t get ya ‘shit on lock’ if ya ‘took a dump in a fuckin Scots lake’..
^not a good opening bar dawg, nuthin played, juz wuznt feeling da concepts

Ya text crew battles get you into heaven, I don’t mean ya spittin well though..
Its just ya put ya name up for a text spot, and everybodies like “HELL NO!�..
^really nyce bar, but da concept & maning in which u used da punch & personal wuz effectless, cuz if he does topicals, he does topicalz, there iz nuthin wrong wit dat

Try to hide bein a retard…switched the letters round to make ya name..
Name used to be half ‘text’ but ya still ‘lay’ it like ya usin’ half ya brain..
^poor first line, really good second line, way 2 revive da bar dawg

5 votes to win a battle…funnily enough Rated’s referrals have got 5 hits..
Not to imply that you cheat…more like why you still bringin more shit..
^ feelin errythin up until ''more like why u still bringin more shit''

Like the shit in ya sig ya can’t ‘raise the bar’ cuz lyrically ya lines fall..
Forever dwellin’ on the past………………………………………⠀¦â€¦â€¦â€¦
Cuz vote-wise you’ll always be wonderin why ya never got five-for..

in yo accent da closer may rhyme, but not in my accent foo' lol but dat iz not a fault if i talk british it sorta rhymes, good closer.

I heard da personalz were fake, so i can only believe wat i am told so dat took da sting out ov bar 1 & 2, rest ov ur verse wuz ok, not da best i seen frum u by a longshot homeboy.


You Winning Hands Down??...Equipped Wita Solo King Back-To-Back...
Watch Me Draw and Fold Kings Quick..Rateds Facts Are Ace-Stacked..
^ok wordplay off a deck ov cards lol, nuthin special

Kid You Couldn't Knock Me Out...Even If You Were Jahovas Witness..
Could Lace Ya Punches With Disease..and Still Not Spit Verbal Sickness..
good opening line, poorly worded second line

Claim To Be The Open Mic Comdeic Genius...but Ya Speks Are Broke..
But I Guess That Name Does Fit You...Cause All Your Texts' A Joke..
^best bar ov da battle, da second line made me laugh

This Battle Is A Complete Upset..Like Premature Ejaculaters In Orgies..
And By Married To The Game..King Solo Will Be On Rapvese Till He's 40..
^good opening line, very weak second

I'll Pave A Highway To Hell In Chinese Subscript To Leave You Fo-Kissed..
You Claim The King Has Returned...It Must Hurt That Nobodies Noticed..
^ decent punch & personal

Good verse dawg, wordplay wuz off da chain mayn. personals were on point, few punches were weak, az were solo'z though, so u got lucky wit dat.

Vote=R-Rated, better verse on da whole, more creative wordplay, better use ov personalz, nuthin 2 peronsal, but juz enuff 2 get u da vote

plz return da favor in mah signature or vote will be removed

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Voted For: R-Rated

King Solo

Ya audio is wack, that’s why they tried hidin ya tracks on the mix-tape..
Cudn’t get ya ‘shit on lock’ if ya ‘took a dump in a fuckin Scots lake’..
This was wack. The first line is a fake personal. The second line.. is just.. shit.. 4/10
Ya text crew battles get you into heaven, I don’t mean ya spittin well though..
Its just ya put ya name up for a text spot, and everybodies like “HELL NO!�..
Lmao. This was good. 9/10
Try to hide bein a retard…switched the letters round to make ya name..
Name used to be half ‘text’ but ya still ‘lay’ it like ya usin’ half ya brain..
This was forced to shit.. 3/10
5 votes to win a battle…funnily enough Rated’s referrals have got 5 hits..
Not to imply that you cheat…more like why you still bringin more shit..
What the fuck? You had the chance to drop something nice here, but then you switch the concept in the middle of the punch, therefore causing it to not connect at all.. 3/10
Like the shit in ya sig ya can’t ‘raise the bar’ cuz lyrically ya lines fall..
Forever dwellin’ on the past………………………………………⠀¦â€¦â€¦â€¦
Cuz vote-wise you’ll always be wonderin why ya never got five-for..This doesnt rhyme. I dont care what you say, this shit doesnt rhyme. If you have to say "this rhymes" then you probably shouldnt have it.. Other then that.. The punch is forced again. You try to make your shit to complex, just keep it simple.. 3/10

Overall - 22/50

R-Rated

You Winning Hands Down??...Equipped Wita Solo King Back-To-Back...
Watch Me Draw and Fold Kings Quick..Rateds Facts Are Ace-Stacked..
This was pretty good.. could have been worded better, but the concept was pretty good.. 7/10
Kid You Couldn't Knock Me Out...Even If You Were Jahovas Witness..
Could Lace Ya Punches With Disease..and Still Not Spit Verbal Sickness..
Are you fucking kidding me?.. This shit is played the hell out.. stay away from the disease/sick concepts fa real.. 2/10
Claim To Be The Open Mic Comdeic Genius...but Ya Speks Are Broke..
But I Guess That Name Does Fit You...Cause All Your Texts' A Joke..
Lol. This was pretty nice.. Pretty good personal.. 8/10
This Battle Is A Complete Upset..Like Premature Ejaculaters In Orgies..
And By Married To The Game..King Solo Will Be On Rapvese Till He's 40..
Staying on the internet your whole life type of shit is played out too.. 3/10
I'll Pave A Highway To Hell In Chinese Subscript To Leave You Fo-Kissed..
You Claim The King Has Returned...It Must Hurt That Nobodies Noticed..
This concept is also pretty played.. the whole you gone/nobody cared type of shit is played out.. 3/10

Overall - 23/50

I got R-Rated taking this battle. It was close as hell though. Good shit..

checking polls............................................. ..........................

upping this bitch battle..............................

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