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BlOoDsHoTT 5 100.00%
the_DukE 0 0%
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Old 05-31-05, 12:11 PM   #1
the_DukE
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From: the Ghetto
BlOoDsHoTT vs the_DukE

IP: 2029 97B3

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Old 05-31-05, 12:12 PM   #2
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Old 05-31-05, 12:15 PM   #3
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Old 05-31-05, 12:20 PM   #4
the_DukE
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From: the Ghetto
IP: 2029 97B3

this nigga made a mistake, thinkin he could battle me/
usually, i sell tickets, but imma merk yo ass for free//
spittin hollow tip rounds, send ya body to the earth/
when im through, imma make this nigga wanna go to church//
send out the search, cuz this niggaz gone missin/
my flow like mike jones, 4-4's im still tippin//
straight rippin, on the mic like you thought my name was grim/
you couldnt win this battle even if ya name was slim//
just admit it man, my flow is hot, it makes ya feel like dyin/
the only reason you bloodshot is cuz i sent ya home cryin//
 
Old 05-31-05, 12:21 PM   #5
the_DukE
New to RV
 
From: the Ghetto
IP: 2029 97B3

uppin for bloodshott.............
 
Old 05-31-05, 12:40 PM   #6
Recluse
Just Another DipSet
 
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From: Boggie Down Bronx
IP: 9CB2 0FC1

Ayo Duke........

Take Out Ya Brain Its No Use-Cuz Only Blood Gotta Lock On Dis Game...
Found Lame? Dis Joke Got His Name Off Of A E.S.P.N GAME!!!
Old Played Out Concepts No Wordplay Won't Make You Win Fo Shit...
Even Playing Boxing-The Duke Still Wouldn't Be An Offical WIN!!...(NamePlay)
People Like You Are The Reason RV Turns Bad...
Net Bums!..Ya Smell Bad..A Net Girl Friend Is All You'llEver Have...
People Clown You Just For The Way You Postin...
Now Imagine Walking The Streets?!?..Its Ok I GOT THE POTION!!...(LOL)
I'ma Give You What Most People Wish They Had In There Lids...
After Dis The Chances Of You Moving Is Like Wheel Bound Kids Doing FLIPS!!!......
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Old 05-31-05, 12:41 PM   #7
Recluse
Just Another DipSet
 
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From: Boggie Down Bronx
IP: 9CB2 0FC1

Uppin............................
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Old 05-31-05, 02:01 PM   #8
DQ
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From: Alosta City
IP: B8B3 0A95

Voted For: BlOoDsHoTT

BlOoDsHoTT:

Take Out Ya Brain Its No Use-Cuz Only Blood Gotta Lock On Dis Game...
Found Lame? Dis Joke Got His Name Off Of A E.S.P.N GAME!!!
^nice opener

Old Played Out Concepts No Wordplay Won't Make You Win Fo Shit...
Even Playing Boxing-The Duke Still Wouldn't Be An Offical WIN!!...(NamePlay)
^funny nameplay right there

People Like You Are The Reason RV Turns Bad...
Net Bums!..Ya Smell Bad..A Net Girl Friend Is All You'llEver Have...
^kinda basic but still punch though

People Clown You Just For The Way You Postin...
Now Imagine Walking The Streets?!?..Its Ok I GOT THE POTION!!...(LOL)
^hehe coo bar

I'ma Give You What Most People Wish They Had In There Lids...
After Dis The Chances Of You Moving Is Like Wheel Bound Kids Doing FLIPS!!!......
^haha nice wordplay in ya closer

Overall good battle, had some nice punches, some were kinda played but they still hit though. Some personal touches here and there which gave battle extra sumthing. Vocab was coo as well as flow n structure, just a solid drop...

the_DukE:

this nigga made a mistake, thinkin he could battle me/
usually, i sell tickets, but imma merk yo ass for free//
^okay opener

spittin hollow tip rounds, send ya body to the earth/
when im through, imma make this nigga wanna go to church//
^kinda self-glorification right here

send out the search, cuz this niggaz gone missin/
my flow like mike jones, 4-4's im still tippin//
^same as previous bar...

straight rippin, on the mic like you thought my name was grim/
you couldnt win this battle even if ya name was slim//
^coo lines

just admit it man, my flow is hot, it makes ya feel like dyin/
the only reason you bloodshot is cuz i sent ya home cryin//
^best line is ya closer for sure

Aight battle, downside of ya verse be the self-glorification though, try to focus more on opponent than on yaself next time you kno (no hate btw). Flow was good though, feeling ya vocab and structure. Last line was dope bar, got some punches in there that worked out well...just try to stay more consistent with em next time aight...
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Old 05-31-05, 02:30 PM   #9
Recluse
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uppin............................................. .
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Old 06-01-05, 12:35 PM   #10
Recluse
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From: Boggie Down Bronx
IP: 9CB2 0FC1

Uppin............................................. ...
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Old 06-01-05, 10:05 PM   #11
Recluse
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Uppin For More Votes..............................
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Old 06-02-05, 12:58 PM   #12
Recluse
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From: Boggie Down Bronx
IP: 9CB2 0FC1

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Old 06-02-05, 08:35 PM   #13
Recluse
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From: Boggie Down Bronx
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yhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhh
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Old 06-03-05, 11:56 AM   #14
Recluse
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From: Boggie Down Bronx
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Old 06-03-05, 12:13 PM   #15
morse code
...fuck life.
 
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Voted For: BlOoDsHoTT

Take Out Ya Brain Its No Use-Cuz Only Blood Gotta Lock On Dis Game...
Found Lame? Dis Joke Got His Name Off Of A E.S.P.N GAME!!!
8/10...good shit, nice opener
Old Played Out Concepts No Wordplay Won't Make You Win Fo Shit...
Even Playing Boxing-The Duke Still Wouldn't Be An Offical WIN!!...(NamePlay)
7/10....decent
People Like You Are The Reason RV Turns Bad...
Net Bums!..Ya Smell Bad..A Net Girl Friend Is All You'llEver Have...
6/10...eehh
People Clown You Just For The Way You Postin...
Now Imagine Walking The Streets?!?..Its Ok I GOT THE POTION!!...(LOL)
7/10....lol, decent
I'ma Give You What Most People Wish They Had In There Lids...
After Dis The Chances Of You Moving Is Like Wheel Bound Kids Doing FLIPS!!!......
8/10...lol, nice closer too

36/50
decent verse some okay lines some good but nothing was majorly played or anything....good werdplay and punches good closer and opener decent multiews also


this nigga made a mistake, thinkin he could battle me/
usually, i sell tickets, but imma merk yo ass for free//
5/10...whack!
spittin hollow tip rounds, send ya body to the earth/
when im through, imma make this nigga wanna go to church//
4/10...OMG, not good at all, coodve been good thoguh
send out the search, cuz this niggaz gone missin/
my flow like mike jones, 4-4's im still tippin//
2/10........WTF, how bout a NO
straight rippin, on the mic like you thought my name was grim/
you couldnt win this battle even if ya name was slim//
5/10...a little decent still pretty gayt hough
just admit it man, my flow is hot, it makes ya feel like dyin/
the only reason you bloodshot is cuz i sent ya home cryin//
5/10...eehh
21/50
this versea was terible, sry but thats just my honest oppinion, you need to definitly work on your punches and werdplay and well, just about everything...keep elevating though

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