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Old 06-26-05, 12:31 PM   #1
Daubs
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Dusk and life

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Dusk appears strangling the horizonal twilight..
Slowly spreading grasping humanity in turmoil..
Engulfing the trails to higher beings in despite..
Dismissed thoughts waken ,we are still unloyal..
Glancing.See havoc from the distant universes..
Living dreams,yet our species is so imaginative..
Still humanity is unleashed by forbidded curses..
Raised nighskys swallthe sky, also comparative..

Ok, it is a little random and complicated but my first piece, just wanted to try it out.
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