http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2258806

As I lay on my deathbed, not knowing how many breaths left
will God pay off my debts depths, and will I be resurrected as requested,
or will my life be neglected and my soul rejected I lived a life of sin and debauchery
so I read the prophecies, and recite the apostles creed, I know I ought to grieve
I even fought for greed, but father watch my seeds, and may they not bleed,
take heed to the way I speak, when I was troubled you gave me peace,
so I know you’re not make-believe, now I lay on my knees,
but can you tell me is it too late to do my sacred deeds...
With nothing gained in life, not much remain in sight,
I try hard to make it right, the cross around my neck, I grab it tight,
but my existence has been heartless-and not one of sacrifice,
and in a world of darkness-it’s hard to grasp the light...
So I lived in resentment, but now I read the testaments, and confess in repentance
hence then, will heaven-sent angels lead me to your descendants,
or will the serpent of seven sins give me my sentence...
My last meal and unable to digest the food inside, my sins who could deny,
so I took the strife, and singing the blues I cry, nothing to lose when I die,
as I look at the sky, I ask is there room for my name in the book of life,
Your laws I tried to follow, but had too much pride to swallow,
no heart because my inside was hollow, wanted to be like your apostles,
winning the fight was impossible, no control I guess I’m just another lost soul...
Remember the years, I went to temples to hear, but the messages were unclear,
the rain starts to resemble my tears, and so I begin to tremble in fear...
My histories untold, but now mysteries unfold, your ministries I used to scold
but now I stand bold, gluttony used to lead me to pharaoh’s gold,
but now I start to walk the narrow road, so take me in your presence with a careful hold...
As I get closer to my judgment date, I ask what’s my fate, I used to dwell in faith,
but now I stand at hells gate, a prisoner surrounded by cell mates,
though the price was for this was low, the bail was still late...
Cursed I be, it hurts to see, that nobody had a life worse than me,
yet for your wisdom thirsty I be, and through the trials you’re the first I seek,
so please listen to the words I speak, I pray this personally,
i did this for me, and last of all ask that you have mercy on me...


Please leave feed ill return the favor

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Shit's whack and boooooooooooooooooooooooring.

^^^There ya go......left feed.........so return the favor....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197913
OR
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197910

^Your a fuckin fag....seriously......anyways....i thought it was an decent piece....had good concept...imgaey was pretty good...and vocab...overall 8.4/10...Good work..but lacked a little on this i thought but pretty good piece ...1

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Wicked One vs C-Bo

U better watch wat you say.I am so far beyond ur level.U dun wanna beef with me.

And I can't battle due to havin 5 battles open......so hit me back in cypher if ya serious about beefin.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197871
^^Right here......hit me back.

Shit i havent beef with anyone yet since ive been on this site...cuz iam an easy going nigga....But fa reel...its just you talkin shit on a chick...i mean come on grow up i mean i could see if it was another nigga...But fa reel i got respect for you but just not on a chick tho ya know...but i cant tell ya what to do so whatever manye.....*Also on my beyond ya level nigga please...Ive been here over a year...Yeah you so my battle with Dizzee...please kid i dropped weak on that nigga and iam still merk him...i can come wayyyy better then that....but whatever.....

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Wicked One vs C-Bo

I dun give a fuck if she's a chick or wat.I ain't got respect for bitches.

I'd rape BlackQueen herself ,then her mother,her baby sister,and even her kids if I eva see them in real life

So fuck you and that hoe.

I ain't wanna go back and forth here.......hit me back in cypher faggot.

*sighs*ktrini dont get pussy he childish n dont pm me wit sumin else i can quote n dont freepost

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uppppiiinnnnnnn

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i thought this piece was pretty decent, the vocab was good,
structure was aight.. & the flow almost lacked here
but it didn't, nice lil thing ya got here, ma


8.5/10

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..The Council..
7 Day Theory

i liked this drop, a lot of emotion and imagery, vocab was pretty good, structure was ok, liked the flow though, overall nice drop, keep em comin.......please RTF on my om Kung Fu Fighting (Gospel Rendition), again nice drop

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this was tight... there was alot of emotion, and its a great topic, good job... its been a while since I been on, and from the looks of it queen, you have gotten alot better... ~1~...

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"I didnt choose this life, this life chose me"

HONOR and RESPECT

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LOL.. Dont worry about that Trini Fag.. Anyway.. Good Drop.. Structure was good as well as your vocab.. Needs a little work, but nothing work cant fix.. Just keep at it and dont stop writting..

Return the Fav
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198311

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fuck you

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