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1 | 16.67% |
Thassarap |
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5 | 83.33% |
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Thassarap vs Madik
IP: F758 A55D
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IP: F758 A55D
Thassarap has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-16-05 09:44 PM.
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IP: D6D7 B7E8
Madik has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-17-05 01:19 PM.
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IP: D6D7 B7E8
I'll have you lookin from under your cap like a bottle of sprite
digest my words cause it's the only way you swallow delight i'm hear to teach you, so for today i'll use the board and chalk you up nice only reason you'd make a tight cut, is if i brought a the knife i'll twist these mic wires to a dna helix and show what you made of you takin' rhymes, so how you gon' beat me with shit you didn't make up cause i spit simplistic art, took away the beat when i ripped his heart whent a capella and inflcited sparks so he'd light up when he's stripped apart cause i'll only way you'd rip the sheets is if you shred the paper since thasarap! it's over, you rubbin blood staines on rhymes...like a red easer
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IP: F758 A55D
I don't care what you say, punk, you're nothin but talk
Yea you're soft, that's why you're named after ya cock* And if you think you can fuck with me, don't even try it Cause your hair ain't red, but my punches can dye it But if you got that itch, and you need-to-see-a-fight I gon knock back "bitch", it ain't gon "bia-bia"-right** You can't win or "t.i." me, so just "be easy", man*** When you rap, you "freeze" up like "Young Jeezy", man**** And if rap skills were money, you'd have only made a quarter You even practive falling off, that's why you're a skateboarder ***** __________________________________________________ _ Explanations: *ma-dick = my-dick **bia-right = be all right ***t.i. = tie (t.i. made a song called "be easy") ****young jeezy sings in "icy" about being iced out (frozen) *****in his profile, madik lists skateboarding as a hobby |
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IP: D6D7 B7E8
Can we get some votes...
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Light Weight
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Thassarap
I'll have you lookin from under your cap like a bottle of sprite digest my words cause it's the only way you swallow delight OK i'm hear to teach you, so for today i'll use the board and chalk you up nice only reason you'd make a tight cut, is if i brought a the knife OK i'll twist these mic wires to a dna helix and show what you made of you takin' rhymes, so how you gon' beat me with shit you didn't make up HAHA...OK cause i spit simplistic art, took away the beat when i ripped his heart whent a capella and inflcited sparks so he'd light up when he's stripped apart HAHA cause i'll only way you'd rip the sheets is if you shred the paper since thasarap! it's over, you rubbin blood staines on rhymes...like a red easer OK BREAKDOWN-YOUR VERSE WASN'T BAD AT ALL...IT JUST LACKED HARD HITTIN PUNCHES AND PERSONALS...YOU MAYBE COULD HAVE TRIED TO PLAY ON HIS NAME A LIL BIT TO..BUT THAT IS ALL YOU NEED TO INCORPORATE INTO YOUR RHYME IS PUNCHES AND PERSONALS I don't care what you say, punk, you're nothin but talk Yea you're soft, that's why you're named after ya cock* HAHA..OK And if you think you can fuck with me, don't even try it Cause your hair ain't red, but my punches can dye it UM..OK But if you got that itch, and you need-to-see-a-fight I gon knock back "bitch", it ain't gon "bia-bia"-right** OK You can't win or "t.i." me, so just "be easy", man*** When you rap, you "freeze" up like "Young Jeezy", man NICE**** And if rap skills were money, you'd have only made a quarter You even practive falling off, that's why you're a skateboarder HAHA... BREAKDOWN-NICE VERSE...I DON'T THINK THAT YOU NEEDED TO EXPLAIN ANY OF YOUR LINES CUZ I GOT EM WITOUR THE EXPLANATIONS..AND WHAT WON IT FOR YOU WERE YOUR PUNCHES AND PLAY ON HIS NAME...GOOD VERSE GOOD BATTLE...1
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Business Not Personal
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IP: 6645 381F
Voted For: Thassarap
Madik Your verse was pretty good. Your opener was good and creative. Your opener was good but could of been worded a little bit better. Ya other bars were good and hard. They were also creative and unique. The only thing that was lackin was personals in it. What I mean is that your bars could of been used for anyone. Thassarap Your verse was pretty good as well. Ya opener was reall good and funny, good wordplay on his name. Your closer was decent, the 2nd line lacked in a hard punch. All your other bars were good and hard. This battle was pretty much dead even but I gave you the vote because you had more personals in your verse than Madik. *No hate just honest opinion* *Please return the favor on the link under my sig... or I'll have to remove my vote*
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IP: D367 E224
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9/10th of The Law
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This was feedback posted for Thassarap
IP: 9449 1E74
over all it was an ok battle. i think madik lost this. i cant vote yet but i think madiks opponent came with ahrder lines. n personals. madik came with more multis n stuff but needed a lil more personals n metas. its all good tho 1
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IP: E396 20B2
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R.A.W Reality Has Began!!
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IP: CDA8 A0B5
Voted For: Madik
you had better structure and flows with a weak closing but thats alright u just need to elevate just a tiny bit....but your opening was tight........ Thassarap tried to achieve doin wordplay but dint actually achieve that goal....but your puches were hard but structure needed elevation.....so does your multis and shit...... MY OVERALL BOTE IS TO MaDiK
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