Now Let Me step up in my pulpit and preach my life…
Teach my rhymes… everytime I speak my lines…
I’ve been… down on the count… beaten & battered…
Slammed, shoved… everytime I keep speakin’ what matters…
Livin’ Life Tryin’ to survive by all feasible means…
Keep the Hustlin’ strong cuz I’m really needin’ the green…
Poor by monetary means but I’m rich in pride…
Nice & Outgoing on the outside but a bitch inside…
My Friends? I only got about Six or ten… and it depends…
I’m not sure about some… but others I know will defend…
In the End It All Turns out about in the same way…
And I still paint my face for war on every game day…
I keep lookin’ to the sky hopin’ someone’s lookin’ out for me…
Cuz everyone else in this cold world hates what I’m about to be…
Keep marchin’ through the Marsh on my path to glory…
My views have been molded from every extreme from Matt To Cori…

So I keep marchin’ on past the marginal caliber…
Speakin’ in that toungued language best known as McCallister…
I’m no longer an Amateur… I’m a professional Hip-hop leader…
Preacher… Lyrical Teacher… I can’t stop and I won’t stop either…
So Turn the Page and let the words of my gospel speak to you…
Get Hostile… I know you will cuz this is so bleak to you…

I got the internet sleepin’ on me but KC is buzzin’…
From nothin’ to somethin’ but it’s still crazy as fuckin’…
I’m lookin’ in my mirror still tryin to change somethin’ not there…
Me Getting the cold shoulder? Fuck you It’s fuckin’ not fair…
I keep writin’ my rhymed lines in time for you to decipher…
Inside I’m diein’… So I metaphor the hell out of every cypher…
Deny my rights? You might die tonight… cuz I’m not playin’…
I’m not a murderer, a gangsta, a thug, or a pimp… so I’m not sayin’…
That I’m… Anything that I’m not… Cuz I gots to keep the course stable…
KC’s poppin’ now ever since Rob rocked the horse stable…
I will of course staple this all together to fit together the puzzle…
KC’s finest gave me a shot so I makin’ sure forever we bubble…
Every mixtape track I will take on as my own personal undertaking…
So it’s known coast to coast that we better than all the others making…
Anything… It’s that individual… Cynical? Nah… Y’all just nervous…
I word this to have more than purpose… The terrorist just burns this…

So I must Stand strong… rise above cuz these mothafuckers gots to burn…
The chemical burns I feel when I turn thoughts to words…
Spread the hurt so I can soothe the pain… I’m the morphine injection…
Fire your shots now… Rise above… Fire your shots now or be rejected…
Turn the page and let the words of my gospel speak to you…
Impossible… I know you think that cuz this is so bleek to you…
So Turn the Page and let the words of my gospel speak to you…
Awful… how you feel after words cuz this is so bleek to you…
Allow me to step up in my pulpit and just preach to you…

I left feed on... Get Robbed - Lexikon & Naturally - Daz

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THE TRUTH IS I'M BETTER THAN YOU

Poor by monetary means but I’m rich in pride…
Nice & Outgoing on the outside but a bitch inside…
^^this aint make sense i think you wored it wrong

the hook is good but i think the syllabel count is off a little bit here for the verses to match the hook on the same beat.i like the whole rhyme its no lyrical more just real and to the point kinda like what shyne or game does on a track.overall this was a nice drop all around but ive seen better from you this is a 8/10 for most but only a 7/10 for you.

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No I really did call myself a bitch.

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This is dope, just like a lot of your pieces..you use a lot of poetic aspects...i love the metaphors..the imagery..all of it....the only thing that could hbave been better in this is word choice in some parts....it seems like you sort of rushed through it in a few parts...but other than that..it's dope as hell...i might have to vote this OM of the month

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew

word man... thanks for your 'in-vision' lol...

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allright solid drop ur a text head with a poetry feel lol it amazes me you drop once in a blue moon and win an award for it ever tiem lol
vocab was the weakest part and it hardly showd so props

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Thank you willa! I heart u.

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Twist, dodge my flow wreck styles
Like crisp large discharged projectiles
Will hit target on any legit market
With Rocket turning like bicycle sprockets
Drop it like its hot, ill and will kill bear like Davy Crockett
In rap I’m clever chief, sever beef with my teeth
But bit my very finger while watching jerry Springer brief

like always vp your style was enjoyable to read,1st paragraph i thought
was sick, really connects with the reader....vocab n structure were good
i was feelin the entire verse, as for the emotion you protrayed it was evident
you kept it on track...good shit....
fav line was-
I keep writin’ my rhymed lines in time for you to decipher…
Inside I’m diein’… So I metaphor the hell out of every cypher…
^^almost wish i wrote it...lol

Thanks man... I appreciate the input.

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uppin'... y'all can't be sleeping on this...

Left feed on My Nation - C.A.L.I.

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Damn homie this was really deep i really liked it , you had nice emotions and good ass feeling going into your drop it really made me feel like i was really going through these changes..i was really feeling that wordplay and vocab it could have been alittle better but it was good, Your structure was okay , some lines were alittle stretched but overall it was a pretty dope drop keep it up

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First rhyme ive checked on here and if this is the standard of the site i gotta step my game the fuck up lol.

feedback:

I’ve been… down on the count… beaten & battered…
Slammed, shoved… everytime I keep speakin’ what matters
^ i liked this bar, kinda relate i guess

My Friends? I only got about Six or ten… and it depends…
I’m not sure about some… but others I know will defend…
^ thought it was weird you went from 6 to 10 but it was cool.

Inside I’m diein’… So I metaphor the hell out of every cypher…
Deny my rights? You might die tonight… cuz I’m not playin’…
I’m not a murderer, a gangsta, a thug, or a pimp… so I’m not sayin’…
^ probably my fave lines here

It was deep in points and real in points which is what hip hop needs.

i liked this like i said before, i dunno if i'm supposed to rate it but..8.5/10 lyricaly and vocab was nice.