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10-30-05, 04:16 PM
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Get Robbed
IP: AD62 3391
I did this a long while back when i was still on NOK thats why it says NOK in there a couple times [Hook]
If you posted on the block
And you slangin weed n' rock
You betta holdin on that glock
Betta have the saftey off
Have it pulled back and cocked
Cuz when i come through you gettin robbed
Respected on these streets like Godfathers disciple
Stayin on my good side, betta believe its vital
Learned from the biggest of hustlas
Was tought how to sort out the bustas
Chin checkin cats with baseball bats Quick to jack you for that new SF baseball hat
Plottin when to jack that 7-11 on 43rd
LexiKon got an arsenal ain't you heard
Tuckin a desert eagle and i ain't talkin bout no bird
The Deagle alwasy got Spare clips and Hollow tips
Quick to drive by shootin out our whips
And if we do ever empty all our clips
It's NOK time for your lips
[Hook]
If you posted on the block
And you slangin weed n' rock
You betta holdin on that glock
Betta have the saftey off
Have it pulled back and cocked
Cuz when i come through you gettin robbed
I'm a young Sacramento hustla tryin ta see mills
My CD's movin faster than bags off E-Pills
Got em' spinnin in every car like spree wheels
Everybody representin so I'm sure to get deals
Down here we whippin figure 8's in scrappers with Golden State plates
Repin Sacramento movin weight like fat bitches at Jenny Craigs
Movin rock on the block supplyin the fiends with product
But unlike Usher Sac cats never get "Cought up"
Sac sheriff knows better than to meddle with us
Cuz the chrome hot as a kettle when it bust
And dont you ever stick your head in to my bussines
Cuz i'll leave it leakin all over the streets off the 9-1-$ickness
Don't tell me to put my money where my mouth is
Your cocky attitude will get your house hit
At any givin time my clique is strapped to attack
This is just a pre-warnin cats need to recoginize SAC is back
[Hook]
If you posted on the block
And you slangin weed n' rock
You betta holdin on that glock
Betta have the saftey off
Have it pulled back and cocked
Cuz when i come through you gettin robbed
I got more "batterys" on my record then the "energizer" bunny
What can i say I'm enticed by the sight of money
I don't hustle cuz I'm greedy
But momma had cancer so i hustle cuz we needy
It's a wonder were alive
I went through massive struggles to survive
So put your wallet outta sight when i arrive
Or you gone be meetin the front end of my .45
I don't like to let it smoke
Only bust a head when I'm provoct
So betta just let me take your cash
Before i gotta resort to whippin your ass
And if you bigga then me I'll let the semi blast
Now don't get me wrong I ain't scared of a man Shaq's size
But momma told me "Don't let me see you with black eyes"
So rather then lettin a bitch hurt me
I pull out weapons to do my dirty
My glock cocked ready to spit rocks
Best remember the shit in the chamber NOK's
[Hook]
If you posted on the block
And you slangin weed n' rock
You betta holdin on that glock
Betta have the saftey off
Have it pulled back and cocked
Cuz when i come through you gettin robbed Left feedback on http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2517000
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THE TRUTH IS I'M BETTER THAN YOU Last edited by LexiKon : 10-30-05 at 05:00 PM. |
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10-30-05, 04:28 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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IP: B4BC F724
This is a prety cool OM. You prolly can do better... as you said this is an older one...
Now your hook is iight at best. I do beleive that you need to work on that definately for song writing. You used simple rhymes... no word play... it was just pretty damn lame man. That's the first thing I read and initially was turned off by it.  sorry.Your first verse... I thought it had a really good flow... You could have done some better with multis and rhyming... but hey... it's your style. Don't let me tell you how to write. It was kinda played out as well... but It was something I would listen to on a CD. Second verse... I really liked. It had it's uniqueness to your Sacramento style... so there's nothing I can really tell you about that verse other than it was enjoyable. Third verse. I didn't care for. Really it flowed kinda iffy at parts. It just didn't seem right, I can't really put a finger on what exactly it is that's wrong with it... Sorry. But sometimes... shit just isn't right. I thought it was all in all a decent track. Just take heed to what I told you and work with it... you'll get it down. 6/10... rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213185
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