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Sex At Wal-MarK
IP: CF74 5D3A
Sex At Wal-MarK
Oh GLAD between my thighs action boys get satisfaction a lots Fatal attraction to my hot pies so I hear plot and lies non-stop So like Michael Douglas one weekend can freak mean get hot They have plans ill like landfills that try and contaminate my mind Their love words collide and serve as guides to find Ways to sex, I have days complex just dodging cock Why my round brown butt is like a bazaar star leading a flock Wise men to recognize trends at Bethlehem so boys wanna trap it One guy say my body like a highway that lead male traffic Down town just to clown around and hound my thing graphic Conditions are plenty certain catch friction for mini-skirting and The sex tradition is alerting, boys come to home close the curtains with plan In mind I stand divine and naked he try take it so coo-chee is in demand Grooving on carpet being a moving target cock gets to be a rocket Launched my way shaped like pistols and missiles and turning sprockets It all start in Wal-marK a boy with a tall heart want some bad oh he jest Wanna get my tongue and stuff my dress new and my breast too hot less Filling as mess spilling in my bra so my nips drips milk in silk oh GLAD His a thug stalks love talk be fire making desire taking me to bed in clad At walmarK waiting on customer service talking to a buster nervous |
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IP: CF74 5D3A
had vocab imagetry and multies out the ass but cats on this site hate and don't care to elevate to this level
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IP: 1D60 6506
imagery..non...multis..sucked...vocab....you had it...because even the word IT is vocab...but your vocab was elementary..why is it you honestly think your the only that thinks your dope? why would we give props to other people..but not you?
catch a fucking clue guy...you suck dick..you need to elevate 10 fold...
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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IP: CF74 5D3A
look In-Vision I have to be dope I dissed the fuck out of so called geniuses like you and you wimp out man yall should elevate
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IP: 1D60 6506
you have to be dope? Because you wrote a diss to me? lol...anyone can write a diss..it doesn't make them dope...or there diss dope....your diss..had absolutely nothing to do with me...i could have used it..taken it the name "in-vision" and used it against anyone..because it was irrelevant to me...i didn't wimp out..i refused to write anything in return...because you have not yet understood the concept of battling....in other words..what you wrote..for the last time..was fucking whack
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 0574 5533
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Vocab means nothing.If big words make you dope,then why not just read the dictionary AAALLL day long instead of working on your flow and shit,right? |
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IP: CF74 5D3A
Natural killa good point IN-VISION is a overrated idiot scared to respond to my diss it made him look like shit for real yo
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IP: 1D60 6506
Vocab means nothing.If big words make you dope,then why not just read the dictionary AAALLL day long instead of working on your flow and shit,right?
__________________ don't ever fuckin try and disagree with me..either do it..or don't... i never said it meant anything....HE SAID HE HAD VOCAB...I SAID IT SUCKED...i didn't say his piece sucked because of it...my point was....don't bring that up...if it was shitty anyways...i agree with you..vocab isn't important..but fucking read whats going on..he brought it up...not me...all i did was point out that it was shitty
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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IP: 1D60 6506
by the way....not only do I agree with how much vocab is a very non-important element..i'll give you a prime example of it....
atticus..uses big words all the time..a lot of the times they don't even make sense...but people are too lazy to read a dictionary...and so there justy like... "damn thats so dope" hence...atticus = most over rated topical cat in hip hop history
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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Ill Nigga Alert.
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IP: 0825 899A
Weird topic n all...Vocab really wasnt there...Structure was decent...n all...And really didnt have a flow...overall- 1/10....Elevate big time manye...
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IP: CF74 5D3A
Wicked One not true yopur level is not this high stop jumping on the bandwagon you can't and probably will never multi-rhyme who you fooling? hell eat some caNDY OR SOMETHING
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IP: D8D6 6AE6
You Are Fucking Trash...
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IP: CF74 5D3A
schema AMAZING i WRITE BEING SERIOUS AND GET NO RESPONSES BUT THIS ONE i THIRTEEN ALREADY SO HERE'S THE TRUT THIS DANG PIECE RIGHT HERE IS OFF THE FUCKING HOOK YALL
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IP: D8D6 6AE6
so youre writing shitty pieces on purpose to get feedback...
interesting strategy...
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IP: 56B7 42C6
sorry man, first off you need to learn how to make sense and vocabulary can only help for better rhyme schemes if used correctly(ie Big Pun) 2nd of all if anything some cats on here have a huge vocab and they get too deep into imagery that it becomes more of a poem than a rapverse.
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