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king slimm 0 0%
El Dios 5 100.00%
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Old 08-08-05, 04:43 PM   #1
Artemis
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king slimm vs El Dios

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Punchline/Persoal Battle(it can be one of them!!)
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Old 08-08-05, 04:44 PM   #2
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sori its meant to say Punchline/Personal Battle my bad!!!
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Old 08-08-05, 04:50 PM   #3
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El Dios has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-05 04:50 PM.
 
Old 08-08-05, 04:52 PM   #4
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king slimm has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-05 04:52 PM.
 
Old 08-08-05, 04:58 PM   #5
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aite here i go itz a punchline-
Talkin in bitch slapped like a macho man/
kan carry ya weight in plastic u bust lika grocery bag/

-Xplanation- in plastic is referring to text battlin cuz ya keys iz plastic ya dig
 
Old 08-08-05, 05:00 PM   #6
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im meant to put ya kant carry ya wieght in plastic u but like grocery bags
 
Old 08-08-05, 05:02 PM   #7
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Just post ya punch up dawg then i will............
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Old 08-08-05, 05:06 PM   #8
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cancel tha battle an ill do it again i fuck my line up
 
Old 08-08-05, 05:08 PM   #9
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u aint even dropped it just do it then say about it underneath!!!!
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Old 08-08-05, 05:12 PM   #10
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Locked the King behind bars,with no food,just let the bitch go Slim…..
He was S.ecertly L.ivin I.n a M.etal M.anner ,left to die,so find his next of kin….

Explanation:
1ST Line: Just a bit of word play
2nd Line: Word play and if u didn’t know wot Kin meant it is when the King(in this case)has died and it is who it is pasted down to!!!

If u don’t get it PM me or don’t vote plz!!!!
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Old 08-08-05, 05:13 PM   #11
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rite uppin this shit plz!!!!!!!!!
Good Luck wi this dawg!!!
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Old 08-08-05, 05:19 PM   #12
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Voted For: El Dios

iight... both punches werent that great

el dios's punch hit harder...wordplay was AIGHT...nuttin great
slim ur punch wasnt hard at all... simple as that

vote - el dios


yall can return the favor on the battle in my sig iight...good look

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Old 08-08-05, 05:19 PM   #13
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Voted For: El Dios

This was pretty weak battle man....lol even for a 2 liner......el dios gets the win becuz his was more creative and used his wordplay to an advantage which gets him the win

king slim, no hate kid just dont think ur 2 liner even rhymed and it wasnt as hott of diss as el dios....RTF OR THIS VOTE WILL BE DISQUALIFIED
 
Old 08-08-05, 06:31 PM   #14
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Voted For: El Dios

...Wow. This like, sucked a lot.

King slimm: No. Just, no. Really. First off, first line was shit, no punch. Second line, was totally gay, no real puch, and man and bag don't rhyme.

El Dios: ...Not really that good. You had SOME wordplay, not very original. At least it rhymed, and had a weak personal, but still a personal. You get this, because the other guy sucks.

v/ El Dios
 
Old 08-08-05, 06:44 PM   #15
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Voted For: El Dios

Heres my breakDown!

1st King Slimm:Talkin in bitch slapped like a macho man/
kan carry ya weight in plastic u bust lika grocery bag/

^^^It didnt even rhyme,An tha punch was like ah compliment..of sum sort!

I give it 1/10


Now!

El Dios:Locked the King behind bars,with no food,just let the bitch go Slim…..
He was S.ecertly L.ivin I.n a M.etal M.anner ,left to die,so find his next of kin….

^^^This was nice,good personal and punch...nice structure an using tha bold text where need'd..it flow'd together..both had no multi's...

I give it...7/10

I wish yall would've had a 6 line battle atleast...but then again..

my vote is for El Dios..he got it hands down...

Return favor please...any 1 of tha links..:thumbs:
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