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07-28-05, 07:23 PM | #1 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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*confessions*
IP: 0D2F 5926
Baby Girl, There Is Some Things Ive Done, And Its Bout Time U Knew
Da Only Reason I Neva Told U Before, Was I Feared For Me And U I Neva Brought Any Of Those Things U Wear, My Friend Gave me The Money* I Know Thats Small, But It Gets Worse As I Tell U More Thats Botteled In Me I Know It Was Wrong Of Me, But Its Time U Knew The Truth U May Be My Only Girlfriend, But Not the Only Girl Im Talking To** To Everyone Else That May Sound Odd, But Its Still Not Cool To Do Member That Day We Made Love In That Bed, I Said There Was Nothing This Thing Is Pretty Important, It Aint Funny, I Have A Lil Something I Only Told U A Lil Bit, And Already Ur Thinking Bout Leaving Me Im Sorry, But Nothing I Say Can Make Up For Giving U HIV It Was Just So Good, I Couldnt Think Straight, I Jus Went Hard And Nutted Not Thinkin That We Were Both 14, Jus Bout Love, And U Are Now Pregnant We Are Jus Going To High School, Im Not Ready To Be A Daddy I Jus Hope Cuz Of This Revelation, Ur Not mad At Me, But Who Wouldnt Be I Also Should Have Told U Before, I Love U Now, But I Jus Loved Before Ur Body*** Now Our Parents Hate Us As A Couple, And Think They Can Keep Us Apart But Nothing, And I Mean Nothing Can Keep Me From What I Want**** But Dont Give In, Or Forgive Me Just Yet, All mainly Because This Is Jus Part 1 of This Niggas Confessions***** *-she thinks i brought it with my money....when my friend gave me the money to buy the jewlery she wears... **-i may go with her...but i am hollaring at other girls....trying to get a lil something.... ***-now i love her for her.....before i jus loved her body.... ****-no one will keep her from me..... *****-part 2 and 3 coming as soon as it happens in my real life positive feedback plz.....real story.......this shit is really happening...i jus neede somewhere to express myself..... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201773 |
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07-28-05, 07:26 PM | #2 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: 0D2F 5926
uppin this...........................
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07-28-05, 07:40 PM | #3 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: 0D2F 5926
uppin.......positive feedback
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07-28-05, 07:56 PM | #4 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: 0D2F 5926
uppin...........................
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07-28-05, 08:17 PM | #5 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: 6C96 7CBB
upping.............................
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07-29-05, 12:54 PM | #6 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: B255 B016
uppin this........................
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07-29-05, 01:10 PM | #7 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: F302 61B9
uppin....................................
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07-29-05, 04:13 PM | #8 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: 0034 0667
uppin this..............................
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07-29-05, 06:34 PM | #9 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: 6618 2DB7
uppin...................kan i get some feedback on this...........
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07-29-05, 07:02 PM | #10 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: 6618 2DB7
uppin this...................................
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07-29-05, 09:21 PM | #11 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: 6618 2DB7
uppin...........................
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07-30-05, 10:03 AM | #12 | ||||
NO SURRENDER
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IP: 828D 0B7A
Pretty deep, flow was off in parts structure was ugly but i like how you expressed yourself,
up the flow and vocab in future. Not bad!
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07-30-05, 05:32 PM | #13 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: 98B5 178F
thx....uppin for more feedback...........
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07-30-05, 09:25 PM | #14 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: 4EF2 67C8
upping............................................ .
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07-31-05, 11:00 AM | #15 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: E586 6C56
uppin............................................. ..
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