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Old 08-11-05, 07:00 PM   #1
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An Untrustwrothy Enemy: Drugs (A Dabatos 'N Paranoid Collaboration)

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An Untrustwrothy Enemy: Drugs


Paranoid
When I was introduced, I got to love the Drug
No thug in my eye, so I'd lie above the Love
I ask is this correct, known as a drug Abuser
I aint no thug, but I ask why a thug a Loser?

Dabatos
Alot of people in the world got the same problem..
Its insane, how this pain, no one aint solved them..
Kids stuck to drugs like chain's super glued on them
Its a shame, that them lame lives completely fallen..

Paranoid
It got contagious in my brain, I felt so Lame
Caught trippin on shit, yet I was dealt so Plain
I had dreams of livin the life, yet I was a Prisoner
Invisible by smokin it, drugs wasn't a Discipliner

Dabatos
Bet it felt like your life span was getting thinner.
It was all like DAMN, ur dreams a blank picture..
People didnt understand, love they didnt show you..
But that sucks Man, of how it always controled you..

Paranoid
Even I told you, its impossible to Complain..
About this fib, lying to contradict my Shame
A miss in reality, drugs got me lost in Confusion
No Fun, a tribute to my pride in this Illusion

Dabatos
Ha, whats amusin, is how it always ends in conclusion..
Its provin the addicted always end up completly ruined..
No family, life became horrible from the beautiful..
When dead, none ends up attending your own funeral..

Paranoid and Dabatos
To stop is easy, without a addiction to Intercept
I'm expected to quit, by not staying a Suspect
But yet, just dont care of wut they think of yourself..
Just be happy, your darkest enemy didnt completly ruin your health..


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Old 08-11-05, 07:02 PM   #2
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Old 08-11-05, 07:03 PM   #3
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Old 08-11-05, 08:38 PM   #4
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Some real tite shit there....i like how u have done the collab.......its every indeph and makes me want to start OMs lol!!!!

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Old 08-11-05, 09:25 PM   #5
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well I personally always thought text collabs was gay but yall peoples so I'll give feed....both yall rhyme words was real basic...I woulda liked to have seen sum more multies but the overall story was nice... great structure.....good flow....I was feeling it jus coulda been sumwhat better
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Old 08-11-05, 09:28 PM   #6
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Ur rhyme scheme was sorta basic u could use more multis structure was ok.....flow was tight......u told the story nice....great job guys 7.5/10.......rtf on my battles~!~
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Old 08-11-05, 09:58 PM   #7
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Ur rhyme scheme was sorta basic u could use more multis structure was ok.....flow was tight......u told the story nice....great job guys 7.5/10.......rtf on my battles~!~

for some reason i dont believe you read our om cuz you say u who are you directing that too?

anyway thanks people for the feed and word trip.

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Old 08-11-05, 10:09 PM   #8
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for some reason i dont believe you read our om cuz you say u who are you directing that too?

anyway thanks people for the feed and word trip.

uppin


yeah thats wut i thought too lol
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