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08-11-05, 07:00 PM | #1 | ||||
C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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An Untrustwrothy Enemy: Drugs (A Dabatos 'N Paranoid Collaboration)
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An Untrustwrothy Enemy: Drugs Paranoid When I was introduced, I got to love the Drug No thug in my eye, so I'd lie above the Love I ask is this correct, known as a drug Abuser I aint no thug, but I ask why a thug a Loser? Dabatos Alot of people in the world got the same problem.. Its insane, how this pain, no one aint solved them.. Kids stuck to drugs like chain's super glued on them Its a shame, that them lame lives completely fallen.. Paranoid It got contagious in my brain, I felt so Lame Caught trippin on shit, yet I was dealt so Plain I had dreams of livin the life, yet I was a Prisoner Invisible by smokin it, drugs wasn't a Discipliner Dabatos Bet it felt like your life span was getting thinner. It was all like DAMN, ur dreams a blank picture.. People didnt understand, love they didnt show you.. But that sucks Man, of how it always controled you.. Paranoid Even I told you, its impossible to Complain.. About this fib, lying to contradict my Shame A miss in reality, drugs got me lost in Confusion No Fun, a tribute to my pride in this Illusion Dabatos Ha, whats amusin, is how it always ends in conclusion.. Its provin the addicted always end up completly ruined.. No family, life became horrible from the beautiful.. When dead, none ends up attending your own funeral.. Paranoid and Dabatos To stop is easy, without a addiction to Intercept I'm expected to quit, by not staying a Suspect But yet, just dont care of wut they think of yourself.. Just be happy, your darkest enemy didnt completly ruin your health.. (A Dabatos 'N Paranoid Collaboration)
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08-11-05, 07:02 PM | #2 | |||||
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08-11-05, 07:03 PM | #3 | ||||
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08-11-05, 08:38 PM | #4 | |||||||
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Some real tite shit there....i like how u have done the collab.......its every indeph and makes me want to start OMs lol!!!!
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08-11-05, 09:25 PM | #5 | |||||||
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well I personally always thought text collabs was gay but yall peoples so I'll give feed....both yall rhyme words was real basic...I woulda liked to have seen sum more multies but the overall story was nice... great structure.....good flow....I was feeling it jus coulda been sumwhat better
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08-11-05, 09:28 PM | #6 | |||||
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Ur rhyme scheme was sorta basic u could use more multis structure was ok.....flow was tight......u told the story nice....great job guys 7.5/10.......rtf on my battles~!~
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08-11-05, 09:58 PM | #7 | ||||||
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for some reason i dont believe you read our om cuz you say u who are you directing that too? anyway thanks people for the feed and word trip. uppin
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08-11-05, 10:09 PM | #8 | |||||
C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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yeah thats wut i thought too lol
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